This seems very forced. Ill keep reading but i hope it improves
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Edward Baratheon
TV · GNaNA
Christmas and Vatican are unreleated. Its like saying 1+1 = 1. Christmas is a commercialized holiday with roots in paganism, judaism and other religions as a winter solstice celebration. Christianity being one of those religions.
"A happy Yuletide to you, Mr. West." said the man as he strolled to the group with a smile on his face. Jacob Greengrass was a tall man with black hair and blue eyes; he had traditional aristocratic features with an angular face and a strong jawline.
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
I thought his plan was to not become popular or to stand out to much?
Quinn eyed the letter and smiled, 'With this, I am one step closer to becoming the most influential student in Hogwarts.'
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
Britain’s Auror Academy??? Isnt the whole purpose of going through the school to meet the qualifications to join the Aurors? The apprenticeship i understand, but a seperate vocational school???
Lia had finally graduated from Beauxbaton Academy Of Magic and was ready for the next stage of her life. It turned out that you could study beyond the seven years of education as seen in the series. After the initial seven, you could apprentice under a certified master, join a vocational school like Britain's Auror Academy, or you could end your education and join the workforce immediately.
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
Spell Check
Garp left the Island just after a weak they arrived and Blaize hadn't seen him ever since. Finishing his daily One-punch man workout in the training ground, he panted a little while sweat covered his face.
Anime & Comics · FanficMortal
The Harem Stamp
Description: A special tool that grants willing parties a sub-routine of the Supreme System. All parties branded via this tool will be tied to the system and will be unable to betray the owner to the core system.]
Fantasy · Kotario
Thanks for another great chapter
ch 105 Back to Alex
Book&Literature · Jmwells2003
Crimsonbright Diagram Of The Nine Heavens????
ch 16 Rise!
Eastern · ORIGIN_ESSENCE
Can we get a chapter or doc with the ranks? i Keep forgetting them.
Contradicts was the wrong word to use. Loose ends is better. The character plans to do all these things but then there is a tangent and they are never mentioned again. Like DNA and the teacher, Warding class now warding book, etc. Plenty of things the main character plans for but are forgotten a few chapters later.
ch 88 Chapter 88: A Number Of Spells
Fantasy · Belg4r
Thank you!!!!!!!!!
ch 97 Charm Crafting 101
Book&Literature · Jmwells2003
Im juat curious as to why the author contridicts themselves so much
ch 88 Chapter 88: A Number Of Spells
Fantasy · Belg4r
I have have a critique. The author continues to expound on Raven’s amazingness when he/she/they want to illustrate he has improved in one area of his cultivation or just to reiterate that progress. If possible I’d like to see some diversity of themes when it comes to Raven utilizing his abilities. Not just bragging but maybe just a simple “Raven makes it to the mountain utilizing the improved space-time laws.” Obviously the author will write it better but i hope i made my point.
ch 438 Smelting Trial 1.1
Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
One more please
ch 430 Aptitude Exams 1.4
Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
Please come back
ch 96 Going Home
Book&Literature · Jmwells2003
I think there is to much focus on what is to be and not enough focus on the now.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Ten years Events
Game Of Thrones: Baratheon The Schemer
TV · GNaNA