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Fantasy · Eveofchaos

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1yr

Posted

The novel is surprisingly good. But I admit that is not the style of many readers. the MC is neutral evil. Negative point: the first chapter. It would be better if the novel started from the second chapter. I don't know how to put into words why. I almost gave up reading right there.

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Fantasy · Iqfauli

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2yr

Replied to FNU_LNU

I agree. i am reading the original now with google trans. Is much better. Sad that they do that. Thank you for the warning.

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Fantasy · Alexender

Vdamato

3yr

Commented

I really liked the text. But I think you should be careful with the paragraphs. Large blocks of text tend to make reading difficult. Ideally, paragraphs between 3 and 6 lines are easy to read. I found it very difficult to follow the reading in this massive block of text.

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