Dao seeker
Let me start with the reason of the low score, First is the story, this is the cultivation type of world, but it feels like the author is trying to merge a isekai type of story, and a bad one, with a slow life. Conclusion, there is no bad choices for the MC just results. Second is the MC, this one is badly tought, i know i sound malicious but there is a reason. Memories. When combining the child and the male, there must be a change, minimal, but a change the same. Then there is the goddess, this is a heavy personality change, but the author doesn´t point it. Three, the cultivation realms, they sound good, but they are a miss, can´t remember, will never remember. Conclusion, author i recomend to ask someone for ideas that will make the story more linear with the intention wished, and to repair my points for the plot holes that they are.
Fantasy · Masquerade1010
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Let me start with the reason of the low score, First is the story, this is the cultivation type of world, but it feels like the author is trying to merge a isekai type of story, and a bad one, with a slow life. Conclusion, there is no bad choices for the MC just results. Second is the MC, this one is badly tought, i know i sound malicious but there is a reason. Memories. When combining the child and the male, there must be a change, minimal, but a change the same. Then there is the goddess, this is a heavy personality change, but the author doesn´t point it. Three, the cultivation realms, they sound good, but they are a miss, can´t remember, will never remember. Conclusion, author i recomend to ask someone for ideas that will make the story more linear with the intention wished, and to repair my points for the plot holes that they are.
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Fantasy · Masquerade1010