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Rise of The Crimson Empire! · C13

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Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4 · C22

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Xboxgorgo18: Is this gonna be like GATE or Summoning Japan?

Rise of the USSR in another world · C0

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I Got Summoned to Another World As a Beautiful Soldier · C6

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Coeur_noirs: Kill and destroy the republic of mérika or at least lab,guard,doc,,,,

I Got Summoned to Another World As a Beautiful Soldier · C6

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HappyLittleSloth: If Ron can be considered a great wizard, Harry must be like Merlin. Ron was one of the most useless characters to the point that he is only there to show that while Harry is pathetic he is at least not as bad as Ron. Also the "talent" aspect of the story is a bit weird since you said Dumbledore has like 11-12 talent. were the Founders Four like at 20 talent, with Merlin at 40-50? its a bit confusing since Dumbledore has such low talent if we are going by a 0-100 scale.

I feel like the power scaling is just to keep the MC weak so he abuses save/reload to degrade his skills to show that while the MC has a system he is not OP. I feel like the system would of been fine w/o the talent so the MC just works harder to keep up with and then surpass the others, now it just seems like as long as he raises his talent he can slack then force a "character reflection" arc where the MC gets beat down into oblivion and makes him realize he was to arrogant and he should work even harder than before.

Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C35

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ferferfer2: Can someone explain to me what happened during the transformation?

Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C34

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Ruined_Leprechaun: Who cares...Zetsu is dead...so there won't be any great wars or Madara's betrayal...

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C47

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NovelMonster: You should make a whole chapter where the whole Otsutsuki Clan invades HSDXD universe, then ends up in the dimensional gap, then one of them is like ‘ what the hell is this place? Is that a lizard tail?’ Then *pppblblblblblt* Great Red disintegrates them with a fart

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C47

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Nirvanic_Sun: "You're late. I require cheesecake."

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C47

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Rise of The Crimson Empire! · C11

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miki1103: Why would he put himself in danger after his wife told him to be cautious? Wtf did he become retarded after everything that happened? What about Lingshi what become of her? Will she be take by this group of Xiao sect? Damn man everything was good till he ****ed up. Its obvious Xiao sect Young master will try something

Smartphone+hypnosis+ATG (Yes, this is that 'parody') · C23

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PotatoKeeper: Beasicly this royal family is too broken. To have what wonderous king must be really good thing for this empire not to destroy anytime soon i think

I'm the King Of Technology · C75

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fanen: This King's got a lot coming his way.....I really like this novel, the MC has got no revenge plans but fate is gonna avenge him anyways....hehe.

I'm the King Of Technology · C75

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Kira_Aurelius: This woman is full blown Yandere. The MC only have to become likr Luigi. He doesn't need to do anything and in the end he'll win.

King Barn's family is fully encompose of only hyenas, and in the end, they will all kill themself effectively giving the throne to the MC. LMAO

I'm the King Of Technology · C75

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amaturewriter: this is the cockblock..who else feels like this?

Genetic Transcendence Dc/Marvel Fic · C4

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Furon: Haha Snape feeling uncomfortable and embarrassed how funny

Money Hungry in Harry Potter · C3

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Immortal Trap Teacher System · C7

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Rise of The Crimson Empire! · C10

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swaran: I have read many ATG fanfictions and i can proclaim yours is the worst one, i mean come on even the people who in original were minor stepping stones here they can actually become villain

Smartphone+hypnosis+ATG (Yes, this is that 'parody') · C21

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TricksterDrasvel: Are you talking about Xiao Yulong? Do you forget he was the one who instigate Xiao Sect's young master to get Xiao Lingshi? He was the one who design the plan and the result was Yun Che expelled from Xiao Clan, despite many strange inconvenient, but still I don't why you think him as stepping stones.

Smartphone+hypnosis+ATG (Yes, this is that 'parody') · C21

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Hokonoso: Apparently a ton of idiots still reading this..

Smartphone+hypnosis+ATG (Yes, this is that 'parody') · C21

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swaran: Because even a complete crippled yun che with just a herb made his life worse than dead and here you actually made him the reason of lingxi death which even mars gravity didn't do and furthermore how can you kill her where actually she can't die unless even if gods become alive they will still die if they try to harm her and your MC all is doing is going after qingyue, he simply is not doing any other thing and he didn't even showed much remorse when lingxi died, either he's a scum who only think that women value is only for fucking or emotionally crippled

Smartphone+hypnosis+ATG (Yes, this is that 'parody') · C21

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jai_97: Uhh, dude what kind of wiki are you using? Cause that info is completely wrong. Kagukya was a member of Otsusuki Clan, all the kekei genkai are mutated from them and all the most power ones like wood release, rinnegan, sharingan and Uzumaki are from their descendants.
https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/%C5%8Ctsutsuki_Clan.
While there was a Kaguya clan it had dead bone Pulse as its bloodline limit: https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Kaguya_%C5%8Ctsutsuki
https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Kaguya_Clan
And finally if you are having problems with grammar, use grammarly(It's free and available online) after using Google translate.
Best of luck.

Otsutsuki In Mutiverse · C3

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VictorWalker: I thank you, because you pointed out my mistake and gave me a solution to improve. thank you

now when i introduce some kind of character i will search a little bit more so as not to make that mistake again

Otsutsuki In Mutiverse · C3

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Sythcake: Actually laughed)) She is definitely a potential conquest though don’t raise your hopes too high as I won’t be writing any lemons.

HxH: KING · C2

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BrokenSoul: since this is HxH.. and you have R-18, I have one question.. is Machi from the Spiders in the cough cough... "D-list"? you know what I mean. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

HxH: KING · C2

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Harry_Jorden_7510: All this fools can go and die together.
Our mc is only the best of all.

I'm the King Of Technology · C64

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Kira_Aurelius: Wow, he murdered his own Father and even spit on his face. It would be ironic that Eli, the son that he love the most do the same thing to him.

I would laugh at that.

I'm the King Of Technology · C64

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Hokonoso: Wonder how he deals with xiao clan coveting his wife. He is much more ruthless than yun che.

Smartphone+hypnosis+ATG (Yes, this is that 'parody') · C20