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mareona is starting to become annoying as a character. Sophia is pretty trash too. I really hope they get rid of them

sophia is bs

that was a dumb backstory. No excuse for misogyny. I hope this doesn't somehow redeem him.

ew gross, that girl was like crawling on the floor and licking that other guys foot, and Aldred kissed her? That's disgusting.

why are you giving all the women such similar names: Mary, Mareona, Mira. Can't you think of a name that doesn't have 'Mar' in it?

man this is such a blatant set up. Now something bad is gonna happen to those guys right.

i've just had a thought, there's no reason to have written a system based cultivation. The rigidity is holding it back more than anything. If he already has 2 powerful bloodlines in him, he should just naturally grow into his power rather than have this forced growth with level ups and stat points. Also the abilities are so restrictive as well. It would be better if he could just slowly explore his talents and find his own ways to make use of his powers.

not a fan of the whole comedic relief pet trope. I hope this thing doesn't get too intrusive into the story

why would you write something like this. It literally just throws away 7 years of his life. And no one even questions why it happened? How come he became a vegetable, and then recovered, and then became a vegetable again? These plot points are terrible. Why would this bloodline trial be designed in such a stupid way as well?

wait is that it? this is what the story is about? just refining bones into swords using the very first spell he ever got? and also, is there no concept of using metals to forge weapons in this novel? why is it only bones? I really hope there's more to the novel than this