WebNovelDaoistGuru

WebNovelDaoistGuru

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WebNovelDaoistGuru
WebNovelDaoistGuru
9 months ago
Commented

I have no clue what’s happening either. Looked ahead at chapter titles and it’s all about this new character. I don’t mind this story but not what I had originally wanted to read about. Like are we going to read about this until he dies one day then he will wake up saying that was a simulation and then get rewards based on all that happened?

WebNovelDaoistGuru
WebNovelDaoistGuru
10 months ago
Commented

Is this going to be BL or Bi from your descriptions I can see this going that way and personally I’m not interested in these novels.

WebNovelDaoistGuru
WebNovelDaoistGuru
1 years ago
Commented

Hi author just wondering if you forgot that the MC is that gourd artifact that can catch and release poison?

WebNovelDaoistGuru
WebNovelDaoistGuru
1 years ago
Commented

In this chapter it mentions him going for 4th level foundation establishment but isn’t he already at the 4th level?

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WebNovelDaoistGuru
1 years ago
Posted

Decent book read up to chapter 104. It’s getting a little repetitive though. It’s like time skip power up go do something followed up by some character interaction then another time skip etc. I thought there was supposed to be a system or something in this novel. Wasn’t he supposed to get a point per month or something like that mentioned at the start somewhere then later on it turns to using spirit stones for points but his talent points are mentioned twice in the whole book so far and one of the talents is beast taming but he hasn’t even tamed a beast yet. Yes he does have a dear as companion and later a fish but he didn’t use his talent on them to tame them. He just finished attacking a beast sect couldn’t he have captured a beast and used his talent on one? Now he is a foundation elder yet doesn’t go learn new skills in the sect like this is a huge miss in the story for his talent. He farming talent was mentioned that he increased it to 30 points I thought and that would normally translate to 300 times farming speed but it still at 50 times. I get the feeling that the author forgets what’s mentioned a few times or doesn’t have a good grasp of where to go with the story. There is room for improvement in this story but I would give it a 6 out of 10 so far. I hope these things can be fixed in the future or have someone go over the story for inconsistency and improvements.

WebNovelDaoistGuru
WebNovelDaoistGuru
1 years ago
Commented

I hope the mc can keep the hatred he has and not go all soft. At the very least kill the brothers. Don’t usually see stories go this route though.

WebNovelDaoistGuru
WebNovelDaoistGuru
1 years ago
Replied to RashCore

Good story so far about 40 chapters in. My question is this going to be incest with his mom?

WebNovelDaoistGuru
WebNovelDaoistGuru
1 years ago
Commented

Is there going to be incest?