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Doves_Gaming: Could his devil fruit be something like the adapt adapt fruit or reality reality fruit.
Ultimate Fruit · C56
Psan: He just needs to replish his life force. There is a fruit that does that
Ultimate Fruit · C56
Karma_Mystery: Could Roger had the fruit and the disease he had was actually been from the fruit healing sense it took life force.
Ultimate Fruit · C56
ChikaYo: The fruit adapt to the situation right? Then when he need a lifeforce, shouldn’t the fruit give him a power to absorb a lifeforce? 🤔
Ultimate Fruit · C56
CapGrizzlyBear1203: I wrote like 4 paragraphs explaining why I think you should do a time skip and what to improve with your characters and story and point out any flaws made. As I was nearly finished, my computer died and I can't be bothered to write it again so I'm just gonna summarise. Thufrat and Ark seem gay for each other. You're trying to make the overprotective trait stand out with both characters but that trait is so much more impactful than the rest of Ark or Thufrats traits that it makes it seem like they only live for the sake of each other. For that trait to work, there needs to be more friends or family in the group for that trait to be taken as protective and not romance. Thufrats fine for the moment as it was only recently that the overprotectiveness trait really stood out, but for Ark that's trait has been popping out everywhere making me think he's gay, and cause the trait is so much more impactful it just makes me think his personality is "gotta protect my friend" with nothing else in his mind. I think you should time skip because I didn't get attracted to the story because of a dwarf. I got attracted to this story because of the wolf. I don't mind if you don't time skip, but please, I don't want the next 10 or so chapters about dwarf adventures, add some chapters about Ark and what's happening to him in there as well.
P.S. I'm not against gay relationships, it's just I'm straight, I don't want to read a romance of two men or, in this case, wolf and dwarf having a thing for each other. I'm just not into that.The Divine Wolf... or? · C82
fearlessj2008: Not sure if I am liking where this is going but I am still going to read to see.
The Divine Wolf... or? · C81
Kupkake: This is probably the perfect example of why you should not overly focus on magic because if your opponent can get close to you then you get seriously wounded. He either needs to have more elements especially ones like earth or metal which should have strong defensive properties,wind or lightning which should be really good at boosting his speed,and wood/plant which should help his wounds along with his already obtained light element. Or he needs to just bite the bullet and start investing in his physical attributes just as much as his magic ones. Personally I think he should do the first one but maybe also add a bit more into his physical attributes.
The Divine Wolf... or? · C35
Shariyema: By now, I’m wondering if there will be a time skip soon since we’re pretty close to a hundred chapters but no hint of abel’s wizarding adventure yet... also, is this guy going to develop any sort of friendship with a guy his age any time soon? Or is he gonna stay a loner besides the old men and his potential future love interest?
Abe the Wizard · C97
Max_Erikson: A insider that gave info or a info broker but those are expensive.
Fatal Shot · C118
vezir33: Why does MC pushed around by woman anywhere he goes? He should be experienced around woman from previous life??? Harem is ok but there is already 5 love interest around MC. I don't think he can handle more due to his personality.
Prime Originator · C25
Voydom: Grandmist = primordial energy. In novels it's energy that you can usually create by combining the basic elemental energies into one. Coiling Dragon is great novel with that theme.
Prime Originator · C3
LaoTze: Ungraded and incomplete? No one has ever succeeded before? Of course he'll try it!
Prime Originator · C2
kelpshake: Im getting really bad vibes from the end of the chapter. He obviously landed where the straw hats were. I REALLY hope he does NOT join them or train them.
A Saiyan in the Multiverse · C63
Patrash: Yeah it was true... but please... don’t spoil my imagination... just give this one for me pretty please... :)
Abe the Wizard · C80
Geeman: Good idea for the original character, Best to try to create a good balance between OP characters and your own ones. Makes for better reading IMO :)
One Piece: The Power System · C52
streek135: I hope that you would consider giving the weather fruit to Nami as it would match well with her elemental staff and all around fit the story better then it being just a side power of the mc
One Piece: The Power System · C52
vbyz: It’s a good idea to create new characters instead of just stealing from Luffy crew. You got to remember that mc suppose to be living a life different from his brother,so make the story more original with your original characters to make the story great. It’s more realistic and different that way.
One Piece: The Power System · C52
Itisn1tmyname: why not just dump the gold and berries and jewels and most valuables that clog their rings inside of their new city, specifically the vault?
Secure storage, no need to spend further points for upgrades, no need to lie about some sketchy super upgrade power....
I mean, he literally walked out of an empty vault, saw that he needed space for valuables and thought: yeah, I'll upgrade their rings and if they notice I'll just awkwardly try to change the topic or something, not like I have a totally valid second option for storage right here in my hands or anything like that! (*blush, pout, looks away*)
Just saying... ┐(￣ヘ￣)┌One Piece: The Power System · C50
Emperors_Phantom: If it's possible, could we get an updated character list. Mainly, the important people, ie. People in the base, MC party, auroborus
Mutagen · C355
Nogardnoir: Thank you fir the chapter, it was nice to read even if it felt short.
*Pick up the golden crown floting around*
also: First !Mutagen · C355
InquisitorCrusader: I hope the MC drags his fat arse from there and take him to interrogation after bombarding the worgens of course
Abe the Wizard · C81
It wasn't specifically said that he fixed those problems.
Also all armors have weak points on joints.
All they need is to let someone charge at him and pin him down when he is on the ground. No mater how good the armor it is stupid to go in to middle of enemy. View More
Patrash: Lol... anyway he has a helmet with a visor... so... you know what I mean...
Abe the Wizard · C80
It is unrealistic to discard advantage of defense and attack superior numbers who are also stronger.
First they should use bows and shoot them from walls.
Wolf riders are the one who are out of time and they can't have siege equipment. That means massive death toll.
Then they could "let them" go through the gates in to the trap that they set up. When they are surrounded by walls and several bear traps on the ground Woolf riders would lose all advantage and even retreat would be hard or impossible if gates get closed.
In such situation even those who are not warriors or knights could help with bows and oil that they can throw on the wolf riders and then set them on fire.
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There is so much that they could have done that i don't know how wolf riders can take the castle with their numbers. View More
Abe the Wizard · C80
Athimaharathi: With armour like mine I don’t need to def.
That’s all he wrote as someone slipped a spear into his unarmoured eye.Abe the Wizard · C80
Ancient_Reader: Thanks for the chapter :)
I wonder if there is a magical object that can help resist the Killing curse? :\
I wonder what will happen at the last trial :)
If the MC fakes his death at the ceremony and waits for Voldemort to come back, new reborn and in his weakest state then it may be possible to seriously injure him, as only Harry can kill him. After all fate is the strongest binding force :)Rise of House Cason · C84
