Hey guys, I am just starting out with writing novels. Please tell me if there are any improvements that I can make! Other than that, I hope you enjoy! -TeaDragon
2018-04-12 Joined Australia
I did not want his spirit manipulation abilities to be overpowered at the start as that would limit his growth. After he levels up (level 3), he will be exploring creative methods like this.
ch 31 True Monster
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This is definitely something that I have begun considering. From about chapter 33 onwards, a new character will be introduced that will stimulate Ren's development. As for the 'magnets' idea. I will definitely consider integrating it into Ren's abilities later in the story. Thanks for the feedback.
[Ding! You have gained the skill 'Spirit Compression'! Your Spirit has increased!]
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Guess :)
Gracias por los comentarios.
ch 13 Hunt (Part 2)
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Good try. This is definitely an AU but it is not set in the past. There is a very good reason for why the Pokemon were hatched on the beach (Arceus did not spawn them and they were not randombly left there). Everything will be explained later. Continue Reading!
ch 28 Daily Life and Improvements
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I just added a level (I changed that to a times now) so that you can differentiate between different amounts of compression. For example: x1 = Compression 1 time x2 = Compression 2 times - stronger and more powerful This is a made up skill.
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The scaling of pokemon in this world will be different. This is so that when Ren becomes really long, other pokemon do not seem too short.
It was a large bipedal pokemon. Its body was about 2 meters tall. Its limbs were thick and bulging.
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I have redited chapters 1 and 2, adding a 0 before the decimal place. Hopefully, this is better.
ch 0 3 Infant (Part 2)
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I will address this in my next chapter. See you then :)
ch 23 Full Capacity
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Still the same week.
Skill percentages will not stop at 100. Something special will happen.
ch 0 6 Bloody Beach (Part 3)
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Thanks.
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I will definitely make him strong but it is going to be gradual. I don't want to nerf the MC when he gets too strong too fast.
The subarc is nearly finished! I hope you guys have enjoyed the ride so far. The next subarc will definitely be more focused on training and evolving.
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Thanks
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It will be explained soon.
ch 34 Strategy
World Devouring Snake (Pokemon Fanfiction)
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