It's true, they're fine. The issue comes in the fact that as he could wish for anything, no limitations were stipulated, he could ask for more powerful things. So I have nothing against your choices, I agree that if they were won by spinning a roulette wheel they would make more sense.
"Fuck it. I will pick the powers I want. I want the body of an Adeptus Custodes with Soul Bonded Shadow Keeper Armor and Gurdian Spear. That is one wish by the way. Now, this isn't a wish, but a request. Can you remove the ingrained loyalty to the Emperor?"
Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
Riven, I'm almost certain that during Arcane she still serves in the Noxus army. The reason would be that it would serve as a way to plant doubts in her mind and thus make her defect before the invasion of Ionia takes place. There is also the fact that Mc could help break her sword, thus preventing the death of Yasuo's master, which would prevent several events from happening...
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Agora quero ver como vai ser o desenvolvimento dela, já que é basicamente uma "folha em branco"
"Sister Qin, let me introduce you, this is Tang Yuehua, owner of the moon pavilion and the guardian of the rain. "
Others · just_a_potato_soul
Isso me fez pensar sobre o Ma Hongjun, já que num mundo onde o sexo é algo aberto assim seria fácil lidar com o problema da alma marcial dele. Mas se eu tivesse que pedir algo seria pra dá um final melhor pra ele, porque enquanto os outros seis são casais Ma Hongjun foi o unico que ficou sozinho no fim, embora ele depois reconheça que foi culpa dele por não ter se esforçado tanto quanto os outros e não ter alcançado a 1º classe... Mas realmente ele merece ter uma situação melhor do que a que ele se encontra em Douluo Dalu 2.5, onde ele tá isolado dos outros e praticamente em depressão...
I was thinking about what to do with Sherek's students, when I remembered Daí Mubai, he's literally a problem for me, I'm torn between liking him, and thinking he's shit.
Others · just_a_potato_soul
Fico meio dividido nessa... Meu lado pervertido gostaria de ver como você iria elaborar essa ideia; já meu lado mais racional acha que seria algo que acabaria deixando a história muito estranha no minimo... Mas no final a decisão é sua como autor, embora diria que se for levar isso adiante tente diminuir um pouco o tom, pois a história já é bastante "exótica" por assim dizer...
Note: I have a question, what do you think about having some futanaris in the story? (Even if I did, they wouldn't be part of the harem.)
Others · just_a_potato_soul
Honestly I'm not sure, maybe something similar to Apollo's Record of Ragnarok. But it would be interesting if their artifacts had a touch of the other's divinity, thus taking advantage of their bond as twins.
(A/N: Well, which weapon do my dear readers think would be best for Apollo?)
Anime & Comics · ExtraZ7
This is something very wrong, but it doesn't surprise me. Imagine a Fate fan who ended up in some other multiverse, I doubt at all that he would try to use these exchanges to get all Saber's Face or something like that
"So slavery then." I confirmed. Why was I not really surprised? Give some Gamers their own multiverses and unlimited power and of course they start a slave trade of their favorite Waifu's with each other.
Movies · StarWaves
Honestly, I have no problem with long chapters, in fact I even like them. I would tell you to continue at a pace that doesn't tire you and that you can still tell the story without losing quality, which is actually very good.
1-. I leave them as they are (over 5k words).
Anime & Comics · Tio_Iroh99
Yes. Besides, the whole dynamic in the relationship would be interesting, even excluding the S&M part from the equation, just the part that one is a devil and the other has Take Over: Satan Soul adds more depth to the relationship; Another thing is also when there is a confrontation with Tartarus, which is something that we are all looking forward to reading, that not only would it be interesting to see the two as a couple fighting but also the support that Mirajane would offer to Lyssa, because in my opinion the The issue goes beyond being resolved just by ending the fight. I think that's what I can think of for now...
1) Mirajane only
Anime & Comics · SMKenward
blacklight virus - prototype
(a/n: comment some other serum/improvements the mc could make, I don't remember a lot of them. It doesn't matter what fiction it's from, I'll look into any suggestion and go from there.)
Anime & Comics · outsidr
+1
3. Bell won't love Xian and stay at status quo
Anime & Comics · ashenlight
Toradora!
'Sigh, I guess the world isn't ready for pocket tigers.'
Book&Literature · Nartleb
pior que o cara lá consegue mesmo kkkkk
"Heh~" He laughs "Just act confident. You can enter any place with a ladder, after all." He says and starts pulling her by the giant bubble that makes her and her pet Shark float.
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
His name had long been lost, so he goes with his codename. He was a mutated human who became a humanoid polar bear.
Becoming Makima in the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Savant_Paragon