HADESZ

11d

Posted

Nice history. Nice history. Nice history.Nice history.Nice history.Nice history.Nice history.Nice history.Nice history.Nice history.Nice history.Nice history.Nice history.Nice history.Nice history.Nice history.

Creating Heavenly Laws

Anime & Comics · Lordanos_80

HADESZ

8mth

Commented

I think the correct word here would be "serve". Different would be if he was in possible danger.

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Level Up in Martial World

Eastern · Aurelius_Imperator

HADESZ

1yr

Posted

I like this story. I like this story. I like this story. I like this story. I like this story. I like this story. I like this story. I like this story. I like this story.

Rewriting #1

Anime & Comics · NovaHyperSage

HADESZ

1yr

Posted

Although this is as unique a type of writing as it is funny, the author tends to overuse comedy; something that has already happened in his other stories. Which, in my opinion, detracts a lot from what "Damn Level!" has to offer. Instead of spouting jokes left and right, it would be better to create appropriate situations to accompany the narrative as well as the comedy and as such, make it all fit together better. An example would be "The experimental log of the mad lich".