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Moments 315
please tell me this bit stops soon.
"Insect Swarm J-!"
Start From Naruto: Shino the Dominator
Anime & Comics 路 Fluffypie
thanks for the chapter King 馃ご
ch 24 Chapter 24
Piercer Of Heaven (Xianxia)
Book&Literature 路 f0Ri5
thanks for the chapter King
ch 21 TSoL Chapter 19 - Unusual practice
Naruto: The Seal of Legacy
Anime & Comics 路 Silent_Dude
welcome back king! ive had this story in my library for a year holding out hope you would return. im happy i did.
ch 20 TSoL Chapter 18 - Changing environment
Naruto: The Seal of Legacy
Anime & Comics 路 Silent_Dude
as long as you come back its all good. good luck on your school work king
ch 0 9 not a chapter.
New God of the forge
Anime & Comics 路 Xinum_Sensational
what an awful excuse. if that is true then say that in the story not in a comment. this is just poor writing.
'I need to find him!'
Before I Died, I Kissed Rias Gremory
Anime & Comics 路 SoftCrow
this is actually the worst way you could do it. it ruins the flow of the story .
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this plot point doesn't match up to the fact that he already explained to her that he looked at some memories of hers to know basic human stuff. remember, he knows what Google is so there is no way he doesn't know what a phone is.
But he still had to act like he didn't know anything about it to not seem suspicious. He tilted his head with a curious look on top of Natasha's head :"a phone? Is that the black box that you humans use?"
Majesty's Journey 2: Natasha's Symbiote in Marvel
Anime & Comics 路 That_One_Dead_Ali
just use majesty instead of Ali. Ali is dead and gone.
Ali seriously had to hold himself together so his mouth wouldn't hit the floor cartoon style! Each of those knockers was bigger than her head!
Majesty's Journey 2: Natasha's Symbiote in Marvel
Anime & Comics 路 That_One_Dead_Ali
you are just making those separate stories entirely right? you wouldn't do something dumb like jumping perspectives in the middle of this story for the other versions of him right? because that would make me drop so fast.
And the third one, is that every soul piece can make his own wishes... That was the part where it was mostly fucked up.
Majesty's Journey 2: Natasha's Symbiote in Marvel
Anime & Comics 路 That_One_Dead_Ali
just a little constructive criticism. you need to find better adjectives for your sentences. "Beautiful beautys" and "joyful enjoyment" are both repetitive and redundant. you should try to switch them with synonyms, it will make the sentences sound a lot better.
I stood up and gathered my belongings before waving farewell to my beautiful mother, who kept looking at me with a look of joyful enjoyment on her face as she waved back. It was time for me to take control of this universe and all of its beautiful beauties.
DxD: The Lustful Gamer
Anime & Comics 路 Orael
always remember you need plot for the "plot" to be better. so in other words, develope the relationships and it will make tge lemon scenes better
Do you prefer me to just go for it and fuck Karin right away without character development? (The same goes for all future girls)
Naruto: Skill Copying System
Anime & Comics 路 AzureRaven69
great chapter. thanks king
ch 44 Genjutsu Theatre
Naruto: Shisui's Little Brother
Anime & Comics 路 Yasui
thanks for the chapter
ch 13 Catching Kin for a Sex
Naruto: Skill Copying System
Anime & Comics 路 AzureRaven69
Odin : You shitty brat... Good good... I hope your dick never gets up again!!!
DxD System In DxD
Anime & Comics 路 Seion
thanks for the chapter King 馃ご
ch 38 Hero Saves Beauty
Another Naruto (Dropped)
Anime & Comics 路 Zorvog
thanks for the chapter King
ch 26 TSoL Chapter 24 - Weekend
Naruto: The Seal of Legacy
Anime & Comics 路 Silent_Dude