This timeline sometimes gets quite confusing. For example, Minato isn't Hokage yet, but Kumogakure already tried to kidnap Hinata. Orochimaru is close to fleeing Konoha, even though he only does so long after the Kurama incident. Another thing that breaks my immersion is the logical and geographical inconsistency. It doesn't make sense that one moment he's in Konoha and the next in another country, and nobody's in a village. How does he know the exact location and time of each event? He shouldn't know where Nagato would fight Hanzo, much less the day and time for it.
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Remember how at the beginning he talked about the orphaned MC (Naruto world) as the only orphan in the group, the others even offered their condolences lol kkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Remember the part about continuing to read? Well... I was at the beginning of the Arifureta arc and it was so bad that I thought, "I know what to do since they're actually different stories that don't interact at all, so I can just skip this part." And well... more than 100 chapters in just this arc, and it's still going to Tensura. I gave up, I'm dropping out.
The best part of a story with multiple protagonists is seeing various points of view and ways of interpreting each one's development, realizing how different they are, which doesn't happen in this story. It's the same plot with the same point of view, and the worst part is that it's an idiotic and impossible point of view. Economic power is better than brute force, but that's only realistic if you're in a normal world. It wouldn't work in a world where people can single-handedly destroy cities. What difference does it make if my lawyer sues the guy if that same guy is Beerus, the god of destruction? And a senseless power scale. The author uses and disuses a plot armor in the form of AI to do whatever he wants, and screw the rules established in the original stories. My AI awakens me with an S-level hunter, my AI copies Sung Jin-Woo's powers, my AI copies jutsus and creates jutsus, fighting Gojo would be exhausting, but my AI would win. Everyone is stupid except the protagonist. Aside from the headaches and chronically lowered IQ issues, this story is quite fun, and since webnovels are currently experiencing their worst phase for fanfiction, I won't abandon it and will continue reading until my neurons are fried enough to not notice the problems and plot holes.
It's just another story that follows the main character, with the MC being a supporting character who, even though he's there, won't change anything, and everything will be the same as the original, without a butterfly effect or consequences. I'll give 1 point for the idea of the system integrating with a unique skill, but minus 2 because it's a unique skill that has nothing to do with its title, [Dominator]. It seems like an imposing skill of control or subjugation, but it's just a mediocre inventory that merges things.
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I read up to chapter 7, and I couldn't stand the main character being a supporting character in his own story. I'll take a break and come back later if the story continues, but apart from that, it was interesting. The system isn't overpowered, and I followed the beginning of WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION, so I have a certain respect for the author.
I believe it's because Megumi has the Ten Shadows technique. Just remember that Sukuna was interested in Megumi before he knew about Mahoraga, so the only plausible reason is that Megumi is the exception, the one in a million, who could be the vessel. And to give more weight to this, in the beta version, Megumi was the protagonist and he was the one who ate the finger, not Yuji.
I lost interest pretty quickly when I found out that the MC's Zanpakuto's power is the Sharingan. It's one thing for a Shinigami to have the Sharingan, quite another for the Sharingan to be a Zanpakuto. I'm hyper-focused on power mechanics, so this completely ruined my immersion. However, it doesn't seem like a bad story, it's just not for me.
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