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A little drama never hurts, as long as it's not too dark and explicit, so far things have only gotten depressing, but I'm sure they'll get better, plus there's always that bit of humor to lighten things up. TFTC

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Kenshin certainly needs combat skills, without them I can't imagine him alive for long, he doesn't need to fight if it can be avoided, but he should be able to defend himself. Plus if he's going to have a harem of girls with supernatural powers, he's going to need to stay in shape or gain power somehow.

It's true, I don't think the Kamisato clan is a blacksmith clan either, so I shouldn't be objective. Although I'm sure Kazuha's father will die in a few years at the hands of Scaramouche. If Ayato is 8 years old, Kasuha should be around 12 years old.

If I remember correctly, the clan leaders were killed by Scaramouche in his revenge against the shogun for rejecting him. Although I don't know if this is the case with Ayato's parents. TFTC

Thanks for the chapter

Solo e leído una buena novela de pokemon harem. Y eso solo funciono porque apenas se concentraba en la relación y entrenamiento con sus pokemon, es decir sabias que entrenaba y tenia una buena relación con sus pokemon, pero en ves de ver su progreso paso a paso, veías su progreso batalla a batalla, ya que en cada batalla veías que el pokemon que usaba ganaba nuevos movimientos y era mas fuerte. De esa forma el autor podía escribir un harem en pokemon. Si vas a darle más protagonismo a los pokemon te recomendaría que te olvidaras del harem o lo mantuvieras al mínimo. En cuanto a las Waifu voto por Dawn, aunque no tengo problema con Cynthia como waifu, por alguna razón siempre termina como un amor platonico.

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Thanks for the chapter, so far the only thing I don't like is the MC's personality. I know I'm going to regret writing this, but with an MC like this I wouldn't complain if they added NTR.

Thanks for the chapter. Learning the technique of Opening the 8 Doors while having the 9 tails inside is not a good idea. What can go wrong? I don't know, but I can think of 3 options, either the fox releases it, the seal prevents the doors from opening, or you just explode from the large amount of chakra out of control.

demasiado pesada, perderías el equilibrio y no se podría maniobrar en el aire

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Thanks for the chapter. Looking at it from the positive side, the side effects only enhanced his talent, turning Asuma into a Legend.

Will Naruko have a tail?

Thanks for the chapter