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Gabriel_Maza: it's bull**** .
nothing is understood.
....................................ONE PIECE Jazz
Fossa: Well this is a really poorly done.
Tell us if you are unable to update soon and if it is a recurring problem tell us when it will go back to normal.
You have to understand that this is a JOB not a hobby like before. You are getting PAID.
If i'm away from work like you guys do i would get fired long ago.
Since i am paying for this i have no obligation to be the slightest bit grateful for this totally ****ty update stability.Lord Xue Ying · C1064
superaidan999: I've watched Naruto. I've watched Naruto multiple times. I'm sure this is nice for some Naruto fans, but I've already seen all of this.
This isn't to discourage the Author it's just that I personally see no reason for these type of chapters in fan-fiction to exist. I've seen Naruto, I watched the character grow up and suffer. I've seen him move past tragedies and grow as a person. I haven't seen the same for our MC though.
Once again, the Author should do what they thinks is best, but Naruto isn't the MC anymore. Ryu Uzumaki is the MC, he is the crux of the story and what makes it unique, what divides a Fan-Fiction from a re-telling of the original story is an understanding of this fact. I can watch the anime and get the same experience from it as I did in these last two chapters. I don't want that, I want the Authors ideas and their own original story. Not the copy and paste tactic I've seen in the past two chapters. Please don't restrain yourself to the source material Author, go beyond that and make something new.A Warrior's Path · C45
oscblade: 1. lets talk about spiritual fruit that has been mentioned many times in other chapters.
2. lets explain bottlenecks for no fucking reason.
3. flashes of inspiration for no damn reason.
4. lets recap that mc was an idiot when it came to utilizing the dao of mirage and so now he can progress fast because of inspiration and the fruit.
5. lets recap that he is in closed-door cultivation and for how long.
6. Lets explain the differences in strength between cultivating systems again.
7. his illusory realm world became a tiny point. *congrats you have reached unity.
8. lets explain the process of his realm turning into a tiny dot... congrats you have reached unity!
9. lets talk about experts at the unity realm vs higher realms again. oh and star pagoda again.
10. lets open our eyes and reiterate again that he reached unity and a different perspective.
11. lets cultivat again oh and reiterate how he was stuck at a bottleneck and now he no longer is with the dark bubble.
This **** needs to be free stop forcing us to pay for these stories i would rather watch ads then pay for this ****.Lord Xue Ying · C842
DeadSoil: even if it is not mentioned how mediocre the protagonists of this author are, either because they always think they are right or simply because they never use their brains and only depend on luck, the worst thing is a protagonist who lives "billions" of years and seems to be always a spoiled child, thinks everything has to be his way and everything else is wrong, mc basically is unable to accept that everything has a beginning, middle and end, and thinks that his family have to live forever , the funny thing is that here in "reality" we live only a few decades, even less often, but regardless we know that the end is inevitable and we have to enjoy life, people deal with death in different ways and often not accept or do not understand, but of course when the person has lived 100 years when she dies is sad but also not equal to this protagonist who acts like a fag who never seems to mature.Lord Xue Ying · C779
oscblade: Ah the aged old pick a disciple that will be forgotten forever. Every cultivation story I have ever read has always been the same. The mc is a cultivating freak who does not act like any other immortal. Those immortals spend billions of years to reach their level but the mc is always like eh 1k year jeez so long. Then other immortals be having at least one disciple while others have more. But mc jeez what a burdon here i pick you... Make sure to cultivate ok goodbye and good luck now back to MY cultivation. Like seriously would it really kill the author to have other parts matter in a story this long. But hopefully, mc will actually pay attention to his disciples and maybe even gain more later on. I would hope that he at least reaches the level the mc in desolate era did with his like 10 disciples. But even in that one mc was like ok here is a cultivation technique go figure out the rest, hopefully, you will be alive later when i remember you.Lord Xue Ying · C677
JPNovelFan: Yes I’ve read several others and I hate when he does **** like this. Just think, in the 666 chapters we’ve had so far, they all encompassed that first 1 million years. How many things and major events happened and progress was he able to make in those 666 chapters?? It was SOOOO MUCH. How can you just then skip 8 million years so u can just say, “Whelp there’s another dao completed.” For fucks sake it’s so bad. They even skipped over what XY’s reward would be from the other rulers. What the hell was the point of that chapter if they just skip over it for a few chapters+8 million years? This is such lazy and bad writing now. It’s atrocious. Get off your high horse.Lord Xue Ying · C670
DarkG7: Wonder why in eeevery novel there is “peace” for thousands of years but when the MC starts to power up some kind of outside force comes and fucks everything up.Lord Xue Ying · C626
Exale: remind me why the author made the MC a world deity. Everything in the book must have logic and everything should be done for something. but the main character simply became a world deity to fight the ordinary deities with his clone ... HmmmmLord Xue Ying · C413
Exale: one of the most talented world deities, realm lord struggles with the peak deity. What an interesting chapter.Lord Xue Ying · C410
Apex_Cultivator: After the young dies, the old arrives. After the old dies, the older arrives. After the older dies, the oldest arrives. Then Yi Yun runs away like a dog.True Martial World · C1534
mcreader7: The author is a master of ending arcs with Yi Yun running. Felitious Rain, Old Snake.... we will never hear of them ever againTrue Martial World · C1524
Raynar: AND? We should have worried? Or can be worried about the hero? But who cares about this? The author is not gifted with the word "completely". No intrigue can not create - only pathetic attempts, which look ridiculous. Characters can not create normal ones - everywhere there are some downs with a superfluous chromosome. The plot can not be created - only repetitions of already existing arches that can ALL fit into one scheme: meets the girl - gets help from her - gets to another place where the villain appears - defeats the villain, saving the girl, and goes to the sunset, the next girl and conflict.
Lord Jesus, I have never seen such talentless authors in my life. Even among the authors of the fanfiction on Harry Potter with a gay subtext.True Martial World · C1467
GrassMudHorse: What exactly is the sinkhole? Is it like a realm that consists of other smaller realms? Or is it like a space that leads to numerous other worlds? I still don't get what the sinkhole actually is...True Martial World · C1359
Incantation: YiYun is too stupid to actuallt took away the fire seed and replace Ling xie'er in the first place. Now he got the karma tho, I pity Ling Xie'er got used by YY like this, while his strength actually so slow improved. Now already chapter 1350+ but he still at the supremacy realm. While divine lord was mentioned and already fought divine lord alongside felicitous rain as his master at around chapter 700++.. isn it too long?True Martial World · C1357
DemonSect: This is the most cringe worthy novel. it just make me want punch a hole on my laptopTrue Martial World · C1357
DaoistFedUp: "he never had the chance to forge and temper his foundations. As such, he spent the first eighty years just fortifying his foundations."
F***King really? is the author typing another story that we don't know about? is this still True Filler world?
Really? the MC never tempered his foundations? wtf?
Say that again... i can't even hahahahahhahaahhahahahahah, apparently what's the author trying to tell us, is that the last 1300 chapters was just bullsh*t..True Martial World · C1354
TrueImmortal: The author completely forgot that yi yun has to return to tian yuan world before the age of 100. Not to mention that he has many other matters in the 12 heaven that he has to solve like killing the evil souls or find his sisters father which up until now wasn't even mentioned or the luo clan that can be annihilated any moment by that evil sect. But who cares about all that right lets just offend a young arrogant bastard than kill his faction and did i mention of travelling to that divine kingdom which is rushing right to his death. And honestly all this rubbish of meeting one arrogant young master after another and nothing exciting in between is boring the hell out off me. Even the dragon couldron and dragon technique and combat body were handled in such a vague manner that i fellt NOTHING Zero excitement. I'm really considering if i shall drop itTrue Martial World · C1300
Snark: Let me disagree in turn.
The main problem is plot incoherence. Earlier it was major incoherence, when each next arc wastes everything that was written in the previous arc. We lost Luo Empire power struggle, we lost war with Phantasm sect, we lost war with bronze giant, we lost war with demonic servants masters. Even though the latter will probably occur in close future, it was already mentioned that those masters won't worth even as appetizer after Yi Yun's training.
Recently incoherence started to appear in details, like with PYP spirits, that allowed Yi Yun to keep God Lock fully disregarding their late master rules. But this arc is full of incoherent details, and they present in every chapter. Yi Yun spared a girl that tried to kill him, because he needed information. But he never spared anyone for his own benefits. Yi Yun "isn't the type to help strangers", but throughout the story he frequently did it. Yi Yun got tired of waiting, because "he is not a patient person", but it's hard to say "impatient" about someone who can sit 25 years in meditation without any movement. Girl being glad to see her master, and stating after that her master always mistreated her. And now this.
Two of them (sparing the girl and sound transmissions issue) were used to push plot in a very artificial way.
So in my opinion, Old Snake character is boring, but it's not the source of all evil. The main problem is that the story already crumbles even in tiniest details.True Martial World · C1235
rgotaku: Another girl who is only there to be Yi Yun's main cheerleader among the peanut gallery, who will also fall in love with him and have her heartbroken, only to be never mentioned again after this arc. Also it always has to a GIRL bcuz, you know, so we can all stroke our egos while pretending we are Yi Yun showing off in front of a girl. Also did you notice...the author has already made Ling Xie'er irrelevant after spending an entire arc on her....also Ling Xington....i guess the author doesn't have enough imagination to show us a few scenes from her POV....when she shows up next she will suddenly be as strong as the MC...TBH i am surprised I am saying this but now I WANT Lin Xington to have gotten together with someone else who cares for her....come on author, we got only two or so sentences so far on Yi Yun's thoughts on Xintong's disappearance...you know what F***k this, Whats the point of reading a goddamn novel when we have to ASSUME the MC's thoughts and feelings...you are as bad as MGA's author and your only redeeming quality is that you can write better fight scenes...THATS IT !!True Martial World · C1232
Snark: I finally understood. The main Dao of that universe is Dao of stupidity. It's inhabitants cultivate the Dao to the utmost perfection. Really that explains A LOTTrue Martial World · C1228
Snark: Yes. It was really pointless encounter.
- Hello, young friend. I'm Divine Dream. You don't know who I am, but I know many secrets that I won't tell you.
- Hello. I want to kill those things. I think they are connected to bronze giants.
- They are connected to bronze giants. Kill them. Bye.
- Ok, bye. Now I'm going to kill them.True Martial World · C1174
DaoistFedUp: Wow.. this is so retarded, another chapter, and he's already ****** enemies with another big faction.. this is sooooooooo retarded.. beyond limits..True Martial World · C1162
Faruel: I just want to know why A) every time a MC gets a backer they become useless to them and B) why regardless of the number of OP things, abilities, skills they get there is always a rich youth of a similar strength (after all aren't these miraculous one-off chances something money supposedly can't buy and are determined by luck and fate...but somehow wealth = having the same lv of power :( )True Martial World · C1145
Composed: As always, Yi Yun being brainlessly arrogant although he knows he's clearly not the strongest. Stupid character is stupid.True Martial World · C1131
Grayscale: I'm so fucking sick of him drifting from place to place with no clear goal and getting mixed up with random girls that have no relevance to the plotTrue Martial World · C1124
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