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So far I have loved the Fanfic, and please don't mind the negative reviews every author has his way into storytelling, word building etc.. and i like what you wrote it's a breath of fresh air, to be honest, i hope that you'll merge the worlds well.

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To be honest this is one of the best ATG ffanfiction out there, you got the world right the characters feel real, and most of all I like How you accurately portrayed Itachi and his character because most of the time other writers tend to Nerf him or make him unrelatable to us who had watched the anime, making him in The process just another character of said world the ff is in. love to read what you write Daily keep going author.

This book deserves more attention Simply love the main character and the growth he had although it has a bit of emperor's domination vibe but still the book is awesome.

Review at Ch50 The story has a great beginning with a great promise, great grammar somewhat interesting side characters but, the most glaring thing about this work and speaking As someone who have been enlisted in the Army, this world's army discipline is quite absurd, you can't have an army without order, even though it's a fantasy world There's too much of bullying and abuse especially towards prospects, military is built by order and strict discipline without them, you have a bunch of mobs squabbling about, and if the army isn't stable internally then believe me you're ****ed, either by your enemies or your own people.