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The idea is good, but he's from Hufflepuff, so I'm dropping this fanfic.

good job a need more.

Ravenclaw ir Slytherin. If it's Hufflepuff, I'm dropping the fanfic.

The Second Tsukage died in the First Shinobi World War, and Onoki was already the only Tsukage livingin. In the second war, all villages have 3 Kage.

He's an idiot. Just throw the bodies into the sea, just use levitation. Use a ship and choose, obviously, while learning magic. If it's any different from that, I'll want to throw this fanfic away because the MC would be too stupid.

Here you made a mistake, Chip. At the peak, you could have handed Tsunade over and gained the advantage, but the Sannin at that time worked together, and that's why you fell behind. Back then, only White Fang could surpass them.

thanks for Thais chapter

parabéns essa acho que sua fanfic e muito boa. mas cuidado pra não deixar o personagem overpower demais e lutas ficarem chatas

essa melhor fanfic em muito tempo que vejo por aqui