"The period of this stun duration was 1 minute"? - Did you mean 1 second?
ch 43 Disbanded, Boss Raid Begins!
Games · ApexPen
Hmmm, a single coin of the smallest denomination can feed a frugal family of 4 for a week? How would anyone buy anything smaller then 4 weeks worth of food for 1 person? Like if i wanted to buy an apple, would i have to buy like 20 to get my 1 bronze coins worth? Seems a bit odd that the smallest coin still has so much buying power, maybe they are cutting the coin into fractions of a bronze coin? But, it's just a novel i guess, I shouldn't look into the micro-economics of it all...
ch 13 Chapter 13
Fantasy · Kotario
Story is good so far, world and system is fairly interesting, went premium at chapter 17 which is bad. Some things can be inconsistent which is annoying, I suspect the Author might be mostly making it up as they write without much planning. - Like in chapter 1 they imply that monsters are fairly common outside the city. - Then a few chapters later in chapter 5 we're told that most of the monsters have been killed off over the years except for some in the old forests in the mountains. - Then later but still in chapter 5 it's also too dangerous for normal people to go outside the city at all because of all the monsters outside. - Then in chapter 7, there are once again almost no monsters outside the city and you can only find them far away from the city in the old forests. It's a small thing, but to have so much conflicting information so early into a novel isn't a good sign to me for the long term.
I'm a Pastor, what the hell is an Acute Gastroenteritis Outbreak Spell?!
Games · Yiqian Qingdai