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SunSky

female LV 12

I love serenity and alone time

2018-04-14 Joined Philippines

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SunSky
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Dear Author, you can drop the other "for nows" to avoid redundancy. Based on the construction of your sentences, it can stand alone even if you drop the excess use of the phrase. For example, the last sentence, you started with the words "for now" and ended it with "for the time being", which basically has the same meaning. Well, if it's deliberately written like that, then I guess it's fine 😌😉

Knowing that the cat is just taking solace and safety for now, Elaina decided to leave it alone for now. But for now, she has to go and start foraging for now. As for what she will do to this cat later on, she will decide later instead. For now, she will get her tasks done and earn a decent amount of money for the time being.

A Single Mother's Farm of the Gods

A Single Mother's Farm of the Gods

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The audacity 😡

"Elaina...are you despising my actions? Aren't you glad that your sister also agreed to be part of our life?"

A Single Mother's Farm of the Gods

A Single Mother's Farm of the Gods

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