So,...super simp benedict snape?
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: The darkness and Severus Snape
Movies · Shadow7Blue
Man,dependes on what you want.If you want to turn in patreon,yeah some rewrite and or editing is a good idea but if you are writing sololy for fun or to improve then I say continue on . Good bashing though,hope you won't needlessly drag it on later as those stories get boring.
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Anime & Comics · _thunderer_
Take a break man,it feels like you are burned. When the story first came out the idea was great,ME had detail writings of his power ups,now though? No details of anything,feels extreamly rushed,I loved his first armor designing with the quarian kid back in Omega,now nothing like that happens. It's also getting repetative.
ch 101 Don't Blink
Video Games · JManM
Are you translating this novel?It kinda feels off,you are writing magic chains where it should be magic circuits,denial of non existence should be denial of nothingness and in general the writing,dialouge and the flow of the story feels off. It feels like someone is using google translation to translate a document and then manually editing it.
Fate/Infinity of magic
Anime & Comics · Back2Future