FabledYak

Interesting story line. Pretty good writing, Grammer and spelling. Want to read more of it, could have done better with a few things like using the system a tiny bit more. After Adam returns from the Zerg planet, the system isn't even used once up to chapter 40 latest chapter. There is also barely any details of cultivating or practising techniques. World building needs attention as well but overall I like it and will continue reading.

I really enjoy this novel so far. It has very interesting system mechanics that I hope will be the focus. Character detail and progression is a bit lacking and the world building still needs a bit of a touch up but we're only on Chapter 32 so plenty of time. Well done author on a novel that can become great!

Not very well written. I can't seem to keep the plot. The character and narrating makes it very difficult to know who is who. I could not read further than chapter 8.