Missing that one. Thank you for pointing it out. Fixed it.
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So far, no. It might be in the future though.
The [Mortality] status effect gives penalty 40%. It is upgraded to [Transcended], reducing the penalty to 20%,
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He should heal. But in his human form, it would not be as fast. His [Transcended] status still gave him 20% penalty after all.
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Fantasy · Alkrishna
He needs to eat. He is a mortal in his human incarnation.
Most of his time, though, was spent in the skin of Jack Night, the human. He walked the streets as a man, albeit a large, tough one. With a Steamrune Shotgun slung over his back and handguns holstered at his hips.
Fantasy · Alkrishna
Only when in human form.
[Status Effect: Mortality: The inherent condition of all living beings, characterized by a finite lifespan and the susceptibility to death. This status effect signifies that the user is now bound by the natural laws of life and death, making them vulnerable to physical harm, disease, and aging. The user's mortality diminishes the effectiveness of any 'Mysterious Ability' traits by 40%. The status effect serves as a constant reminder of the user's vulnerability and the impermanence of their existence.]
Fantasy · Alkrishna
Thank you for reading.
Whoa! Thank you. I miss-typed that one. It should still be 56. I've fixed it. Thanks.
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Fantasy · Alkrishna