Oh and one more thing. I think the main reason for the frustration is specifically because how logical you made the MC, which I like. But having a smart MC just highlights the areas where he acts really dumb. And historically, people don't like dumb, especially when it is so eye catching and out of character.
Sadly, such things required a Domain Lord to use his domain to carve out a part of space and bind it together with something like a bag or a ring.
Eastern · PurpleSpring
I like the authors use of logic. It is very refreshing and makes the world feel more coherently bound by rules even though it is fantasy. I can slightly sympathize with the previous paragraphs lengthy comment because it does seem like, with as much logic that not only the author has put into the story, but the main character uses as well, that the oversight of a rational plan in the face of obvious coming of events is frustrating. I appreciate the logic of the space ring or the struggle the MC has with the border, but it would have been nice to have an internal monologue going over the chain of events beforehand. For example, before he leaves the sect, have him think of the plan in his head and the problems that will occur, like reentering the territory that is guarded by an enemy sect. And by the end of it have the MC come to the conclusion of "well, I need to get this done as fast as possible for my disciple, so there will be unavoidable risks. I'll just have to go for it". Maybe that will take away too much of the suspense, but having the MC take a few L's will make him seem more human, and hide other instances of plot armor behind "luck". So i guess what my recommendation would have been for this is potentially have him fail to acquire the ingredient and some close call event happen, or something with a more definite loss. now that may yet happen, but if i skip this comment and move on to read more, i will forget to come back to leave a comment. take this with a grain of salt. TLDR, I love the logic being applied to these tropes. keep on keeping on.
Sadly, such things required a Domain Lord to use his domain to carve out a part of space and bind it together with something like a bag or a ring.
Eastern · PurpleSpring
you telling me i can think of a thousand boobas at once now?
*Your thought process has evolved. You have learned the skill 'Thousand Thoughts'*
Games · Galanar
One might say he needs to kill 1000
"That is a good amount. You will need to kill many dire wolves to get that many souls." The old mage said, his face scrunching a little.
Games · Galanar
this bipolarism and hypocrisy is giving me whiplash.
"Is that so? But don't worry, I don't mind if you really fall in love with my nephew. As long as you're an obedient wife, of course."
Urban · Dark_Crow1111
This author needs an editor. But not to correct some of his mistakes and check grammar, but to tell him to stop writing.
She had already seen how flames appeared above his palm, how something like taming a wild tiger could stun her.
Urban · Dark_Crow1111
... I don't think this author talks to people much. Something tells me he is extremely inexperienced with every type of human contact. Someone please give him a hug.
Bella was silent for a while and then she laughed, holding her stomach to keep the sound from spreading too far. She said "you seem to think of yourself as a boss, good, I like that, if you are, then I don't mind being even your mistress!"
Urban · Dark_Crow1111
what I have gathered so far: he is not the only sss talent that utilizes every class. but what makes his special is that he can utilize the skills of all the things he has killed in his past life? so he has the repository of skills that others do not. idk if it can or will steal the skills of those he has killed in this life. it wasn't fully fleshed out yet
[Talent: All Methods Known (SSS level)]
Games · I'm Nine Barrel
If my priest started healing the enemies, I would rage quit
She had an A level talent—[Overhealing] (When healing the opponent, she could increase the opponent's spell strength by 50%. When attacking, she could increase her spell damage by 30%). With her talent, even if she did not become a full-time priest and became a mage, she could still go far.
Games · I'm Nine Barrel
where's the "could not help but" counter?
As he read through the notifications, Valyr could not help but let out a light chuckle. "I guess I have no choice but to stick with this spear for real. As long as I get to the 3rd bond level, the fact that it's a basic wooden spear wouldn't even matter more."
Games · TrueDawn
this roundabout way of talking is so dumb. it almost feels like its an insult to the readers. hopefully this changes.
"It's the only thing she can do aside from leveling up and upgrade her skills." Valyr nodded, a light smile appearing on his face.
Games · TrueDawn
He should have assigned all points to INT. Lord knows he needs it.
"Since the variant class needs me to both have a high DEX and INT, then it's no surprise as to how I'm allocating," Valyr muttered as he allocated five points each to both stats. Soon, he opened up his status screen in his peripheral vision, whistling in admiration as he subconsciously hastened his pace from excitement.
Games · TrueDawn
it would serve him well. he would have more breathing room than he did. and he could delay any investigations even longer. with the excuse that he is just getting more comfortable with his abilities or wtv. this method would be more plausible for justifying why he didn't get checked again until he was s rank like you said. but no, the author used plot armor. meaning the author made everyone else drop any form of logic or reasoning to keep the mc safe
And that would not be all. More importantly, he'd have to reveal the reason how his abilities had increased by so much that he could fell a Golem like that.
Urban · 추공 (Chugong)
being suspected of a second awakening is better than being suspected of constantly growing. constant growth is more desirable and obviously more dangerous. so considering that stuff is gonna come out sooner rather than later (which it did), own up to the lesser charge and use it as an excuse for as long as possible. instead, mc relied on the plot armor instead of the logic that is already there and waiting to be used, which makes up the lazy writing. now I may not have read this in two years, but your comment is still flabbergasting. I think you have the lazy reading
And that would not be all. More importantly, he'd have to reveal the reason how his abilities had increased by so much that he could fell a Golem like that.
Urban · 추공 (Chugong)
look at the paragraph between this one, and the paragraph that says slightly less then 8. it says "after reaching 8"
Max exhaled the breath he was holding in. He was satisfied with his result as his affinity turned out to be higher than the rest of the successors. But at the same time, he was a little disappointed as it couldn't reach eight meters.
Fantasy · Blizzard54k
watch how well that works out for him
And that would not be all. More importantly, he'd have to reveal the reason how his abilities had increased by so much that he could fell a Golem like that.
Urban · 추공 (Chugong)
that's a flag bro. keep your mouth shut
After all, it was not as if he had not read thousands of cultivation novels in his previous life. Every time the main character went to the Scripture Storage Pavilion, the treasure vault, or even the garbage dump, there would definitely be good stuff hidden in places like this.
Eastern · Turtle Shell and Hemp Rope
No. She is comparing the genius mage of the kingdom *to* An Kai, or "Hanks" as she knows him. Basically, she is asking "can our genius even match up to this genius in front of me"
"Is the genius mage of the kingdom as talented as Hanks?"
The Mage of Eternity
Eastern · Calm Down