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just offering my opinion don't actually have any intention of interfering in how you write your story. i am loving it especially with how much depth you are giving to each character and the world of Naruto. keep up the good
Will Naruto get Wood Style? Eventually, I guess.
Naruto : The System Files
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
personally I didn't want him to get it since it will just problems at this point in the story in my opinion. another thing would be that it's overused. every Naruto fanfic ends up obsessing over hashirama and his bag of tricks.
Will Naruto get Wood Style? Eventually, I guess.
Naruto : The System Files
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
I thought there was something similar in one of the Naruto novels I don't know which one though
2- Chakra Grain, yes, this is my own concept that I introduced into this fanfic. It doesn't exist in canon. Why did I introduce it? Well, I have a lot of reasons:
Naruto : The System Files
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
most definitely
Also, thoughts on Iruka Sensei because, in my opinion, he is a Chad. Do you agree or not?
Naruto : The System Files
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
wouldn't something like these be a little better since they don't have a curved point? iIlove the weapon idea by the way but the neko-te seem to have curved ends which is for clawing not poking like the hyuga do to close tenketsu point or whatever. or i might not be correctly recalling how their martial art works
What is Neko-te?
Naruto : The System Files
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
excuse me? by any chance do you aspire to write your own book at some point? cause I'm already impressed with just the first paragraph.
My life is a counterfeit coin, glinting with false promises, but hollow inside like their idea of honor. I'm Ryu Kenji, a seventeen-year-old ghost in a city that never sleeps.. Six years ago, my world went up in flames. Dad, the gambler, the dreamer... they say he made a deal with a devil in a thousand-dollar suit. And the price of that deal? Me. Since I was eleven, I've breathed the stale cigarette smoke and cheap cologne they pump into their backrooms - they transformed me from a boy into currency.
MHA: Izuku Legacy
Anime & Comics · XaviValentine
Hearing Ikaruga's story, Alfonzo and Elicia looked at her with disbelief. Originally, they were just comparing Quatro Cerberus' guild hall to the Yellow Flag bar from the Black Lagoon anime in their past lives. But now, they come to find out that Black Lagoon was a part of this world, too.
Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads
Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
"One more." She said and I complied. "Another" Requesting for more. "It just isn't enough I need more of you." She then put her arms behind my neck and kissed me more enthusiastically. I hugged her waist and licked her lips, asking for permission to open.
Honkai Impact: Invictus.
Video Games · Khay_Cee_Padua
yea but in this case he wants the technique so he can strengthen his hinokami kagura. I believe his goal is to complete the sun breathing since the hinokami kagura is imperfect
I can't remake Stone, Love, or Serpent, don't possess the weapon for those, Moon requires powers and I'm specifically focusing on swordsmanship right now.
A New Sun (Highschool DxD Shinto Demigod SI-OC)
Anime & Comics · Karmic_Wizard
the same happened with Ichigo and his crew
He stepped closer, lowering his voice. "I suppose it was to be expected, feeling something so beneath your own league requires a mastery that is far beyond you. I'll get to the point, Adam, their energy... it shows a change. It seems their exposure to you during the years has left some... marks, and is now altering their souls."
Fairy Tail: Shinigami
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
you still have to put the soul in her new body no?
Knowing there was nothing more I could do for Cordelia or Cana, I rolled to my side, pulling the covers up around me, before finally closing my eyes, allowing myself to drift off into a peaceful, deep sleep.
Fairy Tail: Shinigami
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
go ahead make the change otherwise I think you will end up dropping the story anyway
Before I make a decision, I wanted to reach out to you, my readers, and ask for your thoughts. Should I proceed with the rewrites or continue with the story as it is? Leave a comment explaining your opinion, and I'll take all of your feedback into consideration.
MHA: Izuku Reloaded (Dropped)
Anime & Comics · TenseiNovels
I heaved a heavy sigh, my breath fogging in the crisp air of the north, as Zanpakuto slid free of its scabbard with a hiss, with the tip of the blade glinting in the faint moonlight. "You really shouldn't have said that," I murmured without emotion. "Now she won't hold back at all. Not that she ever does."
Fairy Tail: Shinigami
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
I see thanks
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Is it Wrong to Try to Climb to The Top From Danmachi? (AU)
Anime & Comics · ZaelKliz
Caliburn. i think that's what Excalibur was supposed to be called originally or something? don't really know the story but it's used less often so it wouldn't be as cliched
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Is it Wrong to Try to Climb to The Top From Danmachi? (AU)
Anime & Comics · ZaelKliz
isnt she like rich? could just go regardless of the free spot
At that point, Elicia slipped into a strange state of hyper focus. Knowing that if things followed the canon, the Tower of Heaven arc would happen next, Elicia knew she could not miss this trip. Although she realized that most, if not all, of the cultists that killed hers and Alfonzo's parents were probably already dead, she wanted the opportunity to deal as much damage to that accursed tower as she could.
Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads
Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
Alfonzo should make a truck
"Hold it right there, Natsu." Elicia shouted as she pushed her own door open. "There's no way I'm gonna take the chance that you're gonna puke all over the back seat. You're riding back here."
Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads
Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
did she at least close the wound?
"Do you know another Alfonzo?" Porlyusica asked in an annoyed tone. "Just do what I said. Now hurry up and get out of here."
Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads
Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
it should have hurt them when he said that. and to begin with no devil mention the one above in any shape or form
"Oh thank god!"
DxD | Eyes of Malevolence
Anime & Comics · Express_007