LonelyChili

LonelyChili

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Author of "I Am The Eternal God?!"

2018-04-21 Joined Philippines
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LonelyChili
LonelyChili
4 months ago
Posted

I'm still waiting for you, this is one novel i wanted to finish, I was a person who never really liked historical romance but i loved this. I just want you to come back, just finish this, no matter how bad it is or rushed, please end it, to let go of this obsession.

LonelyChili
LonelyChili
2 years ago
Commented

good Lord, the irony

"True Intis gentlemen empathize with ladies in tragic situations and offer help when appropriate."

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

LonelyChili
LonelyChili
2 years ago
Commented

as of the moment, currently busy with school and life

LonelyChili
LonelyChili
2 years ago
Replied to DaoistTaishu

It is similar because the story is heavily inspired by "I am God" by Blowing in History but I don't intend to plagiarize his story. Have a nice day.

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Heirz

Heirz

Fantasy · LonelyChili

LonelyChili
LonelyChili
2 years ago
Commented

So it begins

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LonelyChili
LonelyChili
2 years ago
Replied to Mauritany_DL

The setting is currently in an alternate timeline of earth in the past, right in the Cambrian period, it's around 500 million years ago. As for when was this pyramid was made, it was when Emilio were lost in thought while gazing at the distance. The specific date when it made is unknown, because there is no calendar at this point in time. As for how long it was made, in the next chapter, it will mention it was made for 7 years. Emilio didn't realized he was lost in thought for that long. Thank you for reading, have a nice day sir.

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Heirz

Heirz

Fantasy · LonelyChili

LonelyChili
LonelyChili
2 years ago
Commented

the missile in action

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LonelyChili
LonelyChili
2 years ago
Posted

Writing quality - It's fine, It's readable for me. Stability of Updates - Pending Story Development - So far, for me I like it, specially the prologue, it's interesting. Here's my two cents, I feel a vague tinge of hundreds of webnovels having a similar beginning like your story, Like MC facing a scenario or going into a "gate" with certain specific missions that he needs to do, we all know he is going to pass and complete that mission 90% sure, 10 percent is he is going to fail and suffer a specific penalty that is crucial plot to the plot. I still enjoyed it nonethless, I am waiting for the next chap to see. Character design - I can the type of MC who is a former douchebag who wants to redeem himself, not going to lie, I like this kind of MC, it reminds me of the second coming of gluttony, If done right, we will love the mc, if not, we might be more pissed at him because of the "shitty actions he did." and yes, I love fcking angst. AHAHAHAHA As for the second significant character that I remember is the Mad Plotter, He seems villainy but I feel like he's not. Just a thought. World background - I can see the influence korean webnovels. I like it, although I want for the author to explore the world more because I feel it's still empty. I know Author will deliver as long he continue writing. Here is my honest review. I don't mean to offend you in anyway, I added the story to my collection, hoping to see your progress as well.

LonelyChili
LonelyChili
2 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chap, keep up the good work

LonelyChili
LonelyChili
2 years ago
Commented

I just got reminded of this certain idiotic bunny dad

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On high alert, Felix scanned his surroundings and saw a shirtless muscular man approaching, wearing a peculiar bunny-shaped mask. The man wielded a menacing whip and had pistols holstered at his belt.

Wonderland Odyssey

Wonderland Odyssey

Fantasy · baalnana

  • Heirz original

    Heirz

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION MAGIC OVERPOWERED TRAGEDY IMMORTAL MYTH MULTIPLELEADS

    He who stands beyond space and time. He who bestowed wisdom and life. He who started the beginning. In the relentless waves of time, history turns into epics, which evolve into myths, and until those myths lie buried beneath the sands of time. He who alone stands above the sands. The Immortal prisoner of time, the Eternal Star, whispered. "This is interesting." *** This is an epic, a story that tells multiple stories of different characters across different times, where their echoes still linger.

    7 Chs 17 Collections

  • Clay, The Bloody King original

    Clay, The Bloody King

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE MAGIC VILLAIN BETRAYAL REVENGE CONQUER

    A prince ascended the throne, he crushed anyone who dares to get in his way. He became a ruler who dares to take anything that he wanted. Villages pillaged, cities ravaged, and kingdoms ruined. He was dubbed the "Bloody King." Until the 9 heroes defeated him, his great empire erupted in a brutal civil war surrounded by enemies. The empire was ripped into shreds and it became history. He was imprisoned for all eternity. He vowed he will return and reach the unreachable stars. *** A/N: A chapter is released every once a week.

    4 Chs 7 Collections

  • Not this one. original

    Not this one.

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE MAGIC TRANSMIGRATION

    (Search Bloody King) A broken world it's all there is. A post-apocalyptic one. After all the years that passed, Roach committed many atrocious things in his life and eventually meet his end. But fate seems to have different plans for him. Bringing him into a new fantasy world but something is wrong, The two Worlds are fusing. His Old and the new one. It will bring great catastrophic effects that could potentially end all life. Will Roach stay the villain he is or will he change for the better. (search for Bloody King)

    4 Chs 2 Collections

  • The Cruel Wicked King original

    The Cruel Wicked King

    Fantasy

    Basil, a high-schooler, suddenly vanished in the face of the Earth... When Basil woke up, he was in a forest. It was very chilly. It was not wholly dark, and the full moon was illuminating the place. And suddenly... A voice was heard, Successfully transmigrating the Host. *SYSTEM ACTIVATED* Scanning the Host body...... System Evaluation: A good starting body constitution for our Host. Welcome Host, I am The Cruel Wicked System... I am assigned to give you tasks and missions you must fulfil, or you will suffer severe consequences. Of course, you will gain rewards and points as you progress. You can use it at the Wicked Shop or open more system additional perks that you still haven't unlocked. If you want to know more about the System, I advise you to quickly level up. Good luck, Host. As you embark on your journey to becoming the Cruel Wicked King or much worse. (•-•) *A/N* Hello everyone! I am not good at English, so I am sorry for the wrong grammar and spellings. (Have a good day, everyone.) The book is under rewrite.

    10 Chs 24 Collections