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china numba one.... - definitely not from the 50 cent army
"Your Excellency, the royal family of SA asked us to send ten guards to protect the safety of the royal members. The price is three oil fields, the Ministry of Foreign Affairs of the US..."
1989 Tiananmen Square
Realistic · NK_Lucifurr
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Prologue
Solo Leveling(Only I Level Up)
Urban · 추공 (Chugong)
no no no.... Outcome doesn't scale linearly with effort, it's logarithmic. Double the effort doesn't mean double benefits, only a constant epsilon more than previous. This is mathematically based on utility theory and not something I pulled out of my a**.
Cultivating on the frost jade bed could help one's human body absorb the natural spiritual energies in the air, achieving twice the result with half the effort.
80 Years Of Signing-In At The Cold Palace, I Am Unrivalled
Eastern · Girls Are Cute
the last line is golden...
ch 0 1 Yang Dao.
The Urban Dao Child.
Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH
what......
The path to the truth was usually filled with tears and blood. Luo Hong happily nodded. "Are you crying before the story is too touching? I guess a little girl your age is really sentimental. There, there, I'll tell you another tragic story later.
My Young Lord Is Really Righteous
Eastern · Li Hongtian
this again. isn't this highly suspicious? Trees and shrubs suddenly disappearing around the MC?
The carriages were slowly moving along the path with uneven swinging and sometimes, stumbling on a rock. This made Lee extremely uncomfortable. He made an excuse of keeping watch for wolves and got out of it. The relief he felt was immense. The carriage was moving slower than his walking speed. So he had enough time to absorb essence and sell the surrounding trees to the Shop.
Earthling in Uncharted Dimensions
Fantasy · UtopianLegend
The ghost-like figure went a few meters backward and slowly began to materialise completely. Soon, a human figure completely covered in black bandages stood before him. He was like black bandage version of Egyptian mummies. He was more than 1.75 meters tall and had a 'disappointed' mask on his face. His right hand held a twin bladed glaive which looked normal. His left hand held an orb which had a rhombicosidodecahedron slowly spinning in it.
Earthling in Uncharted Dimensions
Fantasy · UtopianLegend
nevermind, just saw below
"Ok, no problem. Like most folks here you'll have no family name then? That's fine. I've already got your age and status from the Godite stone so your all good there. Here you go then. Make sure you don't lose this here card now you hear? Oh and I'm Ben. Just hollar if you need anything."
My (Monster?) Hero Life
Fantasy · Antihero
Is this a potential plot hole? What age and status did he see?
"Ok, no problem. Like most folks here you'll have no family name then? That's fine. I've already got your age and status from the Godite stone so your all good there. Here you go then. Make sure you don't lose this here card now you hear? Oh and I'm Ben. Just hollar if you need anything."
My (Monster?) Hero Life
Fantasy · Antihero
they pulled it out of their a**
"That guy said everything on television was fake, but this drama actually shows bits of cultivation techniques, so… how did they know about immortality?"
What Do You Do When You Suddenly Become An Immortal?
Urban · Laughter
Everytime I see this line, I imagine that he had already committed the crime....
If a degenerate had been in his place, he might now be examining his own body—but Lin Fan was not caught in that trail of thought.
What Do You Do When You Suddenly Become An Immortal?
Urban · Laughter
I feel that the translation is going to be a pain in the ... .
"How did he suddenly become a human?"
What Do You Do When You Suddenly Become An Immortal?
Urban · Laughter
Show, don't tell. This could have been expanded, to let the users know and understand the characters.
Later on, I acted as an amnesiac man in order to get information from this middle-aged man in front of me.
My Magical System
Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow
Would it be possible to have a round of editing on theses chapters? Here are a few things I noticed from the writing and language that if improved could significantly impact readability. 1. Subject Verb agreement (mainly the aspect of using correct sentence structure/verb for singular/plural subjects, like is/are) 2. Flow. This is a bit subjective, but I kind of agree with the other comment.
ch 0 2 Is this level 1?
My Magical System
Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow
the second observer is on the ship
My body quickly felt the gravitational beast's strain as the ship started to move faster and faster towards the black hole. Hearing parts of the ship being ripped apart terrified me as I felt my body being pulled in different directions. Time seemed to accelerate as I felt my body slow down. I couldn't help but scream in pain as it felt my body was being dematerialized, stretched, aged, and put back together again. However, as I watched, I saw the ship become more and more decrepit as time passed. Like it was aging in front of me. Nearby stars exploded in the background, and others formed. My screams of agony might have been heard initially, but I was watching time flow by in front of my very eyes. Like I was watching the universe on fast forward.
Star Eater
Fantasy · Von_5371
well, if you want to be accurate "time slows down" has a more subtle meaning. When seen from an observer that is far away from the black hole, it will seem that ALL clocks are slowing down as the ship nears the hole, but a person/observer will have an entirely different observation. He will NOT see his clocks slowing down, as to him, all his clocks seem to tick at the "rate" defined by the physics of the clock.
My body quickly felt the gravitational beast's strain as the ship started to move faster and faster towards the black hole. Hearing parts of the ship being ripped apart terrified me as I felt my body being pulled in different directions. Time seemed to accelerate as I felt my body slow down. I couldn't help but scream in pain as it felt my body was being dematerialized, stretched, aged, and put back together again. However, as I watched, I saw the ship become more and more decrepit as time passed. Like it was aging in front of me. Nearby stars exploded in the background, and others formed. My screams of agony might have been heard initially, but I was watching time flow by in front of my very eyes. Like I was watching the universe on fast forward.
Star Eater
Fantasy · Von_5371
I had the same thought, but I'm willing to let this pass....
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Star Eater
Fantasy · Von_5371
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Dying Like Sheep
The Bored Immortal
Fantasy · Resurgent