Obskure - Profile

So much potential, instead we get depression and huge plot holes. I get not being able to talk would be hard and a huge adjustment but the level of angst for a supposed grown man is just terrible. He does not even train his voice just focus on not talking at all and getting his shit kicked in so as to never make a sound, full edgelord. Almost get captured by a normal human instead of you know using powers you have, so get caught most likely tortured turned into a weapon or use your powers, power mind you he has not trained cause you know angst and depression but thankfully saved at the last minute. From what other reviews have said you need 40+ chapter to get passed depression and 100 for anything to start, so much investment for maybe a good story. Good luck

This had a chance at being a really great story, but the it's kinda mid. Mc is pretty edgy, though try's to come across as the cool bad boy, He is rubbing his chin non-stop for some reason, not kidding he should have not chin at this point, also he closes his eye's alot for some reason guess it's the edge lord thing to do. What made me drop it's they guy left Betty....... never abandon the loli. So after putting up with his stupid chin rubbing eye closing split personality crap, not to mention this is ment to be a chat group book with no chat group or the fact his got it and then never looked at it again for 30 odd chapters I can't go on.... ehh it has potential but the annoying crap just really wreaks it.