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I think the author is saying they are the cousin. brought up by the parents of the girl View More
Elemental Breakdown (hiatus) · C5
10 months ago

Ethlathini: This is f*ckin’ awesome!!!(in library)

Elemental Breakdown (hiatus) · C1
10 months ago

Ethlathini: Too bad I voted today

Elemental Breakdown (hiatus) · C1
10 months ago

DeJeL: *This review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism:
The first few chapters feel too focused on the "World Development" not enough character development in them.
Also I suggest you make some grammar changes in chapter 5, if you'd like me to go back and point them out specifically I will with a ****** reply to this review.

Good Points:
I love how you threw in the idea of plains, trains//cars, and subs//boats without directly mentioning them. Also the "No MC" (or, based on what you have said, mysterious MC) is also a good point in my mind, It's unique.

Personal Reply:
I am sorry, but I do not wish to continue this story, just not of my preferences. I hope you will get many readers and keep on writing (even if your reason to write is to spite the haters, keep it up). You are a cleaver author, and make a decent story.;,;.

The Chaos of Evolution
1 year ago
Thanks View More
Chronicles of the Weakest Wind Mage · C3
1 year ago
thanks View More
Sovereign of Blood · C89
1 year ago

killjoy103: I am re writing my review to say it's totally worth the try.
The first volume is little complicated. Author took an entire volume to introduce the background world. that was little too much. Honestly I feel that worth it.
The Author writing style is changing too. Thats good.
Most important the story have huge potential to develop. I hope Author can mathup the expectations.
All in all I really like it, as it stands now.

The Chaos of Evolution
1 year ago

TrumpetBear: Very interesting! readers just have to be patient because in the first few chapters, a lot of foreshadowing is present that almost made it out of place but it will be alright later on. just a few flaws in grammar specially the spelling, but it doesn't affect the content.

The Chaos of Evolution
1 year ago

RainbowFlame: great... ADDED TO LIBRARY................................................................................................................................

The Chaos of Evolution
1 year ago

BloodHeaven: I thinks it’s a well done novel and I love the background story and all the races, but I think I am too stupid to see who the MC is. Author please tell me.

The Chaos of Evolution
1 year ago

ClemCa: Do you want me to tell you a story?
That's the story of how I saw the best novel in the universe.
...






I don't know too, but this one is good too!

The Chaos of Evolution
1 year ago
do you really need to do this type of thing? View More

dreamwithnogod: The content has been blocked

The Chaos of Evolution
1 year ago

FourEyes: The background is unique and plot of story is good! About the grammar and twist of story is easily to understand and readable!
At first the story is little bit confusing but if you continue reading, maybe you found it is good story.

Guys please try reading this novel is worth it!

The Chaos of Evolution
1 year ago

aree: I am reviewing my own novel just to clarify the position of the Novel. It's slow at the start, as I don't want it to be an info dump, still, want to show the beauty of the background world. That's why I am also publishing 2 chapters per day for now.


But when the gear change (believe me, it will change soon) it will be a fast ride. How to see you guys with me then.


You don't need to vote, don't need to review just comment on the chapter how can I do better, I will be happy.


And very sorry for my silly mistakes in the story. Thank you for reading.

The Chaos of Evolution
1 year ago

killjoy103: this is one of the best

The Chaos of Evolution · C0
1 year ago
Reading Status: C63
They story is really slow at the beginning and the background is complex. But as the story progressed it change.
I know if you get pass the first 30 chapter then you will see it.
It's good to see this novel on the front page. But guys please read first and review later. View More
The Chaos of Evolution
1 year ago
thanks View More
The Chaos of Evolution · C0
1 year ago
chessy View More
The Chaos of Evolution · C0
1 year ago
I fully agree with you about his grammer. View More

TheCityCouncil: These fairies seem interesting. You are doing well introducing them.
Your writing is pretty good, just needs a little editing. There were a few small grammatical issues. Main thing to be careful about is your verb tense. Saw a few cases of switching between past/present/etc in one sentence.
Also a few problems with rhetorical questions. “What are nature fairies really are” in this case I wouldn’t use “are” twice, easiest fix is to remove second “are”
Hope this helps, not trying to be nit picky.
Have a powerstone for your work ;)

The Chaos of Evolution · C0
1 year ago
really likes this one. i love to have her as mc
you are point at the mc. either knix or mayumi is mc i feel. will be happy if mayumi is the one.
editing is problem View More
The Chaos of Evolution · C0
1 year ago

TheCityCouncil: These fairies seem interesting. You are doing well introducing them.
Your writing is pretty good, just needs a little editing. There were a few small grammatical issues. Main thing to be careful about is your verb tense. Saw a few cases of switching between past/present/etc in one sentence.
Also a few problems with rhetorical questions. “What are nature fairies really are” in this case I wouldn’t use “are” twice, easiest fix is to remove second “are”
Hope this helps, not trying to be nit picky.
Have a powerstone for your work ;)

The Chaos of Evolution · C0
1 year ago
ha ha View More
Badge in Azure · C4
1 year ago
the story is rather good. it's little differnet from other novel. where the mc knew little about the game still doing better than other View More
MMORPG: Martial Gamer · C8
1 year ago
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