rayoloco

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rayoloco
rayoloco
8 months ago
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shoudnt mimi attack with the flame to brush contribution and earn some exp? a mosquitto leg is still meat

rayoloco
rayoloco
rayoloco
1 years ago
Posted

The story is interesting so far but there is too much filler in the chapters. Also the chapters are short, so sometimes feels somewhat anoying having to read 7 chapters just for something that in 3 chapters could be done and it would be as good as doing in 7 chapters. Webnovel is not cheap for reading. Quality does not consist of oversaturating with details that do not interest. But as i say the story is interesting so good job and keep going, this just how it feels for me

rayoloco
rayoloco
2 years ago
Commented

its an interesting but there are some repeatedly misspelling that hurt my kokoro. like fallow -> follow hearth -> heart there are some more but this are the most notorious ones. im not sure if its intended like some kind of slang speak. but well done in general with the novel.