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"Yes, Please come in." Daniel's voice sounded out again and the door was quickly opened revealing the room full of strange artifacts and dozens of metal scarabs flying around as it carried scrab to the recycle bin.
Urban · RavenClaw471
Invisible-> Invincible
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Fantasy · GREAT
For some reason the author decides to make a parallel world where both versions of the mc are different from each other. Now I would have had no problem with this if this had been the plot point from the beginning but the author pulls it out of nowhere and ruins all the emotional attachment and character development of every other character for this weird plot twist. If this was needed because the author ran out of ideas then just end the novel instead of ruining so much work and effort because of a terrible plot twist.
Games · Black Swordsman Online
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
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"Yes, Please come in." Daniel's voice sounded out again and the door was quickly opened revealing the room full of strange artifacts and dozens of metal scarabs flying around as it carried scrab to the recycle bin.
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Urban · RavenClaw471