'Auch.' Kuromiya flinched, even if not all of those words were directed at him, it still felt quite harsh coming from someone like Urahara. Ichigo had yet to utter a single word, hearing in complete silence with shocked eyes to what the man had to say.
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I feel like you wasted 2 chapters for nothing, like the quest he got was soo fucking useless the condition, the reward all of it just so you could put him in a bead next to ichigo soo fucking useless, and it started good and then you just do this shit with the last 2 chapters just stop it and begging once more, doing shit and making it right is not the way you go to be a better writer ( you do that on a sketch book or something) you **** it up you see that you ****ed it up you STOP, you don't continue so you could **** it up once more, what you do is start again and do it right, this is a copy paste of anime with an extra character who just goes with the flow.
'Auch.' Kuromiya flinched, even if not all of those words were directed at him, it still felt quite harsh coming from someone like Urahara. Ichigo had yet to utter a single word, hearing in complete silence with shocked eyes to what the man had to say.
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