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Rends: This is blank chapter. Summary : DS attack, retreat Godora pursue abandon planet. DS2 attack planet.The Legendary Mechanic · C538
TrumpetBear: Lastly, you are not even ashamed of yourself criticizing a well written story with your limited knowledge.
Are you serious right now?
Attention span my a**, you can't even speak properly. Look at yourself in the MIRROR first before you try to impose your so called high degree of knowledge.
You're even acting as if you're someone rich. You've even become racist now. I bet your EGO hurts so much that you even have to elevate yourself in something you are not.
You don't even have class and propriety in the way you speak. Seriously? Get a life.
Finish highschool first and go to a proper University while you're at it if you're really rich.Paragon of Destruction · C2
TrumpetBear: And please why do you kept saying i'm a writer? Are you nuts? That baseless assumption is way out of the topic that we were supposed to talk about.
What is wrong with you?
Are you mentally ill?Paragon of Destruction · C2
TrumpetBear: Why would I respond to any of your pointless banter? We're not even at the same wavelength after you replied to my comment that was reprimanding you of your rude behavior.
You don't even know the importance of grammar in a literary work, and you just criticize a well written book with barely reading two chapters saying that the story was not good.
Tell me, how can we communicate when in the first place you don't even have grounds for the things that you asume as the truth? You don't even know how to appreciate art.
You like candies while I like coffee. You get the point? If not, educate yourself first before you make baseless criticisms.Paragon of Destruction · C2
TrumpetBear: Then it's sad, because you don't even know what my point is. That's why i took pity on you. Maybe next time, be more mindful of your words and don't presume things that you know nothing at all in the first place. Good day.Paragon of Destruction · C2
TrumpetBear: you're way far from what you presume as my identity. I'm just a simple man who saw stupidity and i need to stop, if not, correct it. And by the way, the "writer persona" that you described me as, i think, you are just referring yourself. With that kind of life, i think you should just read properly and be more critical when you're reviewing or commenting.Paragon of Destruction · C2
TrumpetBear: I pitty you. I think you're just jelly because some people are good in writing, and you want to be like them, but you are not.
Even your comment reeks of poor grammar.
And indirectly, you are criticizing this book like you know what will happen in the end, saying that it is one of those well written but poorly made stories.
I for one would first judge the quality through grammar. You know why? Because this is literature.
Your language teacher would be ashamed of your blunder.Paragon of Destruction · C2
Doctor_Daoist: Wait. LEGGE's a she? Been imagining a wrong sadistic face then!The First Order · C11
Shamial: Translation Quality: You know translation quality will be perfect with Legge translating
Stability of updates: 11 chapters on the first day of release, and Legge is always consistent with chapters so no need to be worried
Story development/world background: Interesting world, nothing groundbreaking but still interesting and seems done well, will update in the future to rate story progression as I can't judge when only 10 chapters in, at least it's different from other novels with the novel seemingly going in a different direction than, meet young master, get underestimated, kill young master, repeat.
Character design: honestly love the main character, he doesn't actually like a know it all and feel realistic, it's an apocalyptic world, he's not like some saint MCs who let their enemies go just for them to return later, but he's also not so paranoid where he won't trust anyone as seen by his brother and helping his neighbour. MC is also funny but not trying to be and very good at adapting and not scared to get bloody.
Overall: initial impressions are; great translator, interesting book, I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes, will reduce reviews if the story goes to **** though.The First Order
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Random027: Latest Raw Chapter 1242
by 18:28 of Oct. 18, 2019 GMT+8Monster Paradise · C1239
Random027: Latest Raw Chapter 1240
by 11:34pm of Oct. 10, 2019 GMT+8Monster Paradise · C1239
Diabalic: You know, initially I was very interested in this book, but it quickly turned into a Chinese dogma book. You want to insult other people's and cultures that's your business, but to do it and most of your readers are from that country/culture is stupid beyond belief.I Found A Planet · C294
Layline: Gratz to the first and that's a cool mechanic. Soran gonna have an anti paladin army I'm betting.Abyss Domination · C181
I’m Really a Superstar · C1696
beddedOtaku: ;)Legend of the Empyrean Blacksmith · C423
FlowsLikeTheRiver: I think the author was maybe overdoing it with history, way too many characters and names with most of them not having anything big that makes it easy to separate from the rest. Also the chapter-long appointments with these forgotten names didn't help. You would actually need to take notes if you really wanted to understand who everyone is.
Despite this it was a phenomenal story, probably on par with the best kingdom builders, despite building a lot on chinese history it managed to remain entertaining. And the strategies... I don't think I've read another novel with so many great twists and turns on the battlefield, it's just usually the protagonist overpowering everyone with his uber-developed army (eg. RTW), this one was a pure game of chess with lots of thinking, plenty of battles ended before they even started.
Although most characters were one offs (its not easy to have strong characters when you have a couple hundred of them) at least the main character and his closest aids went through some real development, it was especially nice to see how an average cheated player managed to cultivate a real ruler-like aura.
Amazing story.The World Online · C1356
sonusriman2002: I am sad that it ended but I am really CURIOUS about the the thing ouyang shuo asked to Gaia in their meeting. the words that would reveal after 200 years.The World Online · C1356
ORIGINALIMMORTAL: Who here spent 22 SS just to commemorate the ending?The World Online · C1356
Legge: Ren Xiaosu walked over to the road and picked up the man's metal weapon. Then he walked back next to the man. As he stared down at him in contempt, he estimated there to be at most four to five seconds before the man would regain his mobility.
Suddenly, the voice from the palace that had been silent for a while intoned again. "Quest: Set your foe free."
But just as the voice from the palace started trailing off, Ren Xiaosu crouched down and jabbed the metal weapon into the man's stomach. The sharp sound of the metal weapon tearing through leather and skin left every onlooker or anyone eavesdropping with a tingling sensation on their scalps. Then the man started bleeding profusely.
"You have around three minutes. If you can reach the town's clinic in time and get it stitched up, there might still be a chance for you to survive," Ren Xiaosu said calmly.I’m Really a Superstar · C1694
Legge: The First Order
Ren Xiaosu was not asleep because he had been exploring the secrets of the palace in his mind.
In the circular palace, the walls were lined with old wooden cabinets, making it look like a huge showroom of sorts. However, he could not see what was on the display cabinets in the showroom as they were covered in black mist.
In the middle of the room, there was only one table with a brass typewriter on top of it. It was an obsolete typewriter that would make loud clacking sounds when typed on and hadn't existed for a very long time since The Cataclysm.
At this moment, his consciousness was standing in the center of the vast palace as he looked at the "display cabinets" around him. It looked like items were floating within the display cabinets, but they were hidden by the darkness. That black mist didn't allow Ren Xiaosu to see what was floating inside.
These display cabinets were connected to the dome of the palace, making it look like a huge museum. Ren Xiaosu walked up to one of the cabinets and tried touching the item floating in the black mist. But no matter how hard he tried, he could not penetrate the resistance of the black mist.
It was a power that he could not pry into right now.I’m Really a Superstar · C1694
I’m Really a Superstar · C1692
WutBrian383: Ok?The God Virus · C0
Legend of the Empyrean Blacksmith · C417
Legend of the Empyrean Blacksmith · C408
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