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This book has good grammar and the quality is great. Only problem is it gets hard to read because the Mc is never in any danger so there is no suspense at all. His plot armor is crazy, I read up to ch 500 and after constant ass pulls and handouts I couldn’ take it anymore. Story starts off great, but just gets hard to read because of this, and there is a lot of cringe but that I can take compared to the ass pulls and plot armor. They need to not have shops in these system novels anymore especially ones where anything could be bought.

The grammar is ok, there is a lot of repeating words in sentence. It’ wasn’t a bad t-18 novel and the main character though an asshole didn’ do anything too out of line. However the main charac becomes an asshole and steals his subordinates wife and it was for an awful reason and it just makes you hate the character and made me drop the novel . The only thing that would make it good is if the main character loses everything and gets cucked because he’s a horrible person.