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serzh_ghazaryan: I like this fan fiction. I have read many Harry Potter fan-fictions and in my opinion, it is one of the best.

Although, chapter updating is bad, I still recommend to read this for fellow funs of the Harry Potter movie.

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction
1 month ago

OukisLips: The story isn't bad but readers should be warned that this is essentially an "alternate universe" fanfiction. The dark wizards are evil, and the light wizards are...slightly less evil, but still evil. Even McGonagall is morally bankrupt enough to try and consciously swindle money from an 11-year old orphan, and attempt to turn him into a glorified slave. The characters are just too different from the way they were portrayed in the source material. It goes beyond "bashing" characters, as more than 90% of the characters' evil deeds are things the author just made up. With the whole "might makes right" theme this just feels like generic Wuxia #586, not Harry Potter.

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction
1 month ago

Exodian: Couldn't finish the second chapter. This feels sooooo primitive. Even among fanfiction. While this, judging by reviews, can be among the best HP fics on webnovel, doesn't mean it being good. It means that there are few to no good HP fics on this site. Trust me, I've read some very good ones, and there are very good ones. But, maybe, not here.

This having a score of 4.7 only tells me personally, that scores of webnovel absolutely can't be trusted.

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction
1 month ago

Rashio: Another Harry Potter fanfic written by a person who doesn't know the first thing about the HP universe. How hard is it to understand that they can't use magic until it awakens and it's not that the children are dumb or anything they are literally not wizards until a certain age.

HP universe doesn't have magical cores which you can cultivate!

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction
1 month ago

Issou: It could be very good but I'm just tired of bashing fics. If you dislike some characters as an author I can understand but don't make it so obvious.
I mean McGonagall owning 3 contracts (2 of them are pretty much obvious scam) and trying to cheat him is too much. Dumbledore weakening the magical England to keep his position as the strongest wizard is bull**** too, he is an old man and he is clearly not an idiot.
You wrote smth like "humans are greedy". Yeah maybe, but then stop lowering their IQs for no reasons. It's like you are trying to make your MC appear as a clever kid by bashing clever characters. I could appreciate an evil Dumbledore/McGonagall if it was well written, but here it's just bashing.

Otherwise, I guess the MC is not bad. Typical Mary Sue but at least he isn't a scum. A bit sad you didn't develop the muggle side ( Yknow he lived for 11 years but we don't know any characters aside from Sherry and his mother. We don't know his acquaintances, his school teachers, his karaté teacher, ...).
His bloodline trait is interesting, his magical training a bit too smooth but that's not a real problem.

Just my opinion, you can disagree.

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction
1 month ago

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Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction
1 month ago

Niko91: Why write this the addition of the mc changes nothing, this is one of the biggest time waist of time you can find , know the ending good nothing changes , i would rather read a lnmtl novel at least they add something to the story

Chronicles of Arth: Prince of Shadows
2 months ago
Reading Status: C22
Why write this the addition of the mc changes nothing, this is one of the biggest time waist of time you can find , know the ending good nothing changes , i would rather read a lnmtl novel at least they add something to the story View More
Chronicles of Arth: Prince of Shadows
2 months ago
Reading Status: C9
All the 5 stars review for a novel than at most is 3 stars , mc has the intelligence of retarded monkey and the planning geniuses of a drunken squirrel . View More
Fallen Hero System
2 months ago

CANAAN: Lots of copying, poor formatting, and finally a rant.... Honestly, the initial plot was the usual one that holds potential. It hurts to see it wasted like this.

The Magician ascendance
2 months ago

amaturewriter: Read till chp 3 and it is BS..like ok the grammer and language is decent but the story is all bull..nothing unique or different from cannon..even with a fucking system the MC dosnt do ****

The Magician ascendance
2 months ago
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lurkinghermit: just garbage don't read he's just telling the same old harry potter canon.............................................................................

The Magician ascendance
2 months ago

lurkinghermit: just garbage don't read he's just telling the same old harry potter canon.............................................................................

The Magician ascendance
2 months ago

Not_a_Penguin: This is just cannon with a TINY bit of difference.

Don't waste your time reading this until the author makes his fanfiction and not semi copy/paste. We have a system but he doesn't use it or try to use anything to his advantage. Hell, he even acts like kid harry potter.

The Magician ascendance
2 months ago

Devil_soveriegn: This loser author is copying entire canon, and he gave a system to the MC and given the quest to follow the canon and be stupid **** harry potter or die.

You don't have talent for this kind of hard work bro.
So, please stop writing this as a fan-fic and just say.
You want to read potter verse and you are copying the book loser.
For release of every chapter Iam going to post you are a loser on the reviews believe me loser.
I don't want to give even a star but you know it's not possible.

The Magician ascendance
2 months ago
Reading Status: C3
Why wright this story if its a copy paste cannon at least harry couldn't defend himself the mc has no excuse??? it's pointles to read it. ............... View More
The Magician ascendance
2 months ago
Reading Status: C3
Ok this is beyond retarded , how can he live in a ninja world and never get the hint to get stronger, mentally challenged mc and author................................................................... View More
Great Expert Ninja-Naruto Fanfic (My Version)
2 months ago

IHateHarem: I am not sure what to say about this story, not really bad, the author forgets a few facts at one time or another, but the line still goes well, my complaint is quite peculiar though.

The author started the book with a mc having everything to follow the dark side, ****, being a dementor is a good part of it, but the protagonist incredibly does not retain hatred in the heart after reincarnating, not even a basic fear of protection against others. .

okay, he "knew" that others probably wouldn't hurt him, but the human heart is unfathomable and the protagonist's heart looks like a clear mirror compared to that.

Another thing is the ease with which the plot unfolds and certain convenient things, some characters even look extremely different, unless the author is using a text from the original book.

Finally, to summarize, the idea is good, the application is bad.

Reaper Of The Wizarding World
3 months ago
Reading Status: C1
Is your character mentally challenged ? Because that's the only conclusion i came after reading 1st chapter , and you skipped a few details on how old she is and how long did it take to go handle the normal routine for all small infants. View More
The Goddess of Death
3 months ago

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Rebirth of the Entertainment Giant
4 months ago

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The Law God - Artic
4 months ago
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The Law God - Artic
4 months ago

Niko91: It a good story but the lack of updateds makes me think it will most likely be abandoned .
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Becoming Immortal
5 months ago
Reading Status: C13
It a good story but the lack of updateds makes me think it will most likely be abandoned .
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Becoming Immortal
5 months ago
Reading Status: C32
It was ok but after chapter 29-30 the author fucks up, it seams death has no meaning to the mc.
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The Avarice System
5 months ago

shelwyn: I started to skim read after chapter 46, nothing in particular made me give up but let me tell you about how all the little things added up and made me dislike it.

The novel starts off with the MC in an accident and an old grandma saving him. Then it skips right into a scene where the MC is in his 30s or 40s and is talking to some corporate big shot really ambiguously. You have no idea what's going on, no idea what kind of novel your reading, nothing. The first chapter failed to introduce anything and chapter 2 just jumped right into the story.

Once the novel starts going into it full swing it ends up having way too many conversations and actions that need a deep cultural understanding of Korea to understand.

Things like famous districts, gang relationships, underground deals, Korean politics, relationships with nearby countries. It's too much for people who don't know about Korea like a Korean citizen.

The updates come in random spurts and aren't in any way stable.

The story has nearly no World Background or development. It just throws you into Korea and expects you to know the small details of Korean culture.

A mass of characters are thrown into your face and they have very long names and are named similarly. It's hard to remember who is who and keep track of who did what and their relationship with each other.

The story development keeps the MC's background ambiguous and it's really annoying. It's subtle to the point of being stupid. The MC makes a phone call, some problem he was just told about is suddenly resolved by his ambiguous words? Thanks was that supposed to show how powerful the MC is? All I see is poor writing or a very bad translation that's missing all the important details.

Well that's it I really don't recommend going into this one. If your Korean just read the original if you aren't don't bother you won't enjoy it.

Sooho
5 months ago

Krizantem: Hi, I'm the author of the book, voting for my own book as a classic webnovel tradition. Don't be fooled by me:)

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Hi, I'm the author of the book, voting for my own book as a classic webnovel tradition. Don't be fooled by me:)

Hi, I'm the author of the book, voting for my own book as a classic webnovel tradition. Don't be fooled by me:)

The Law God - Artic
5 months ago

Emirhan_Sergenkaya: OMG... This novel a great bro😲😲 wuuuhh. It said " you must write one hundred forty character." Phaaa its idiot... OMG it said "Not yet." Who are you bitch computer??

The Law God - Artic
5 months ago

Niko91: I don't think i can read anymore , logic sems to just be non existing in this novel. Like the do-over novels but this one kills my brain cells , i will need a doctor if i continue to reed any more chapters.

Granting You a Second Life
5 months ago

Drako_Shattersword: I like the concept of the novel but the author is too biased against and hates the u.s. Furthermore, he doesnt know what the law is in the u.s. on guns and that the military is actually disciplined. Moreover, the mc is kind of dumb he doesnt realize the need for resources even if they are not usable at the time being. I really like the story but the author likes to assume tooo much about other countries he doesnt know about

Stronghold In The Apocalypse
5 months ago
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