Sen1orBrotherRo

2yr

Commented

time perception is wrong. it kills the mood for the reader entirely...

Yet despite their haste, they had arrived only when everything was over. After Vastor's arrival, between Tezka, the Kings of the Woods, and the army's reinforcement, the battle had lasted barely one minute.

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Sen1orBrotherRo

2yr

Commented

so that guy is the gate keeper of the reality gate? basically a bouncer lol

ch 1438 Reunion in the Age of Immemorial

Worlds' Apocalypse Online

Sci-fi · Flaming Fortress

Sen1orBrotherRo

2yr

Replied to Panda_Rabbi

morgar gave it to him. we are not 100% sure as of yet what kind of beast lith exactly is except for the wyrmling/dragon comparison from outsiders

'Last but not least, his bloodline carries an outstanding power that it's only limited by his lack of experience and resources. As much as I wouldn't mind being blood-related with him, I know for a fact that I'm not.

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Sen1orBrotherRo

2yr

Commented

ara ara

"The bad news is that I can't help you. Your method and mine are too similar. If I say any more, I'd have to either kill you or force you into marriage with me to preserve my secrets and you are a bit too young for my taste." She chuckled.