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Hayato_Shinohara: Indeed, you are right on! Also, do not hesitate to bring up the negative aspects of the story either (if you truly feel that there are any). Feedback just like the kind you left earlier is always a good thing if it can help me improve the novel. :)
Vengeance Upon Fate · C28
Hayato_Shinohara: Indeed, you are right on! Also, do not hesitate to bring up the negative aspects of the story either (if you truly feel that there are any). Feedback just like the kind you left earlier is always a good thing if it can help me improve the novel. :)
Vengeance Upon Fate · C28
Hayato_Shinohara: I must say, you've interpreted the story nearly as good as I could. I'm impressed!
I do agree that at times the main character doesn't show enough retaliation and distrust to some people. I try to make it where he has no choice but to "proceed with caution" in those moments, though you aren't the first to bring this up so you have a point.
Despite the suffering he went through he is still deep down a caring person, thus he wouldn't let two stranded guys who had a reasonable excuse to endanger themselves in a forest alone etc.
To be fair, he still feels very lonely as well. From time to time, a small amount of hope lingers that there can be someone out there who could understand him. I should do a better job pointing these out, that goes without saying.
Thank you for your response! It made me very happy that I got the novel's message across to you! 💁♂️Vengeance Upon Fate · C28
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But all in all, the ppl reactions are quite accurate lol. ppl are like that, they will shun what they fear and cower when they cant shun it. Like that orochi alliance, i feel those nigga's can kill for all i care.
Secondly Mc's trusts too easily😅, and im not telling ya to change any of that i know he will get his development. Im just saying what i think. View More
Vengeance Upon Fate · C28
Hayato_Shinohara: Whenever I go back to his backstory such as this chapter, the time his village burnt down, the moment he escaped and met Mitsuo etc. At those moments he is 12 years old. In present time (outside of his backstory) he is 19.
Vengeance Upon Fate · C17
Hayato_Shinohara: This is his home village before he was taken to the city (Varsilis). When he woke up after the village burnt down, he wasn't fully conscious thus reality hit him as soon as he remembered everything that went down in the previous night before he passed out. Seeing the floating corpses in the river, burnt remains near the ruined houses were also "reminders".
Vengeance Upon Fate · C17
Hayato_Shinohara: This is his home village before he was taken to the city (Varsilis). When he woke up after the village burnt down, he wasn't fully conscious thus reality hit him as soon as he remembered everything that went down in the previous night before he passed out. Seeing the floating corpses in the river, burnt remains near the ruined houses were also "reminders".
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Just a question tho how old is the Mc? The guy feels too pure, how the heck his last city folks thought him as a murderer xD. View More
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Daoist_Dan: Any updates on what you've tried and liked? I'm curious about what you thought of my suggestions.
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Oceanfrost: Also the fact that he is doing the exact same thing as the supposed monster is doing
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CliffkunLolRekt: Screw all the authors on my library that did not post today and tonight I’m going crazy with less to read
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Sandwhich: People like you are the only reason the earth didn't turn to dust then explode ten million times over while burning and freezing so much that you can burn and freeze nothing too then be eaten by a giant space cat
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