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Shinzo: Alright. Let’s make this simple. Since you’ve at least seen the 1st 3 movies that’s plenty.
1. No matter why things are done for the greater good doesn’t make them right.
2. At the start of the 1st movie Dumbledore leaves baby Harry outside the Fucking house! Which belongs to as stated by professor Mcgonagall “worst sort of muggles imaginable”.
3. For 10-11 years Dumbledore doesn’t even bother to check in on Harry to see how he has been doing. By the time Harry goes to Hogwarts all Dumbledore needed to do is act like he cared for the poor fool and Bam! He has him.
4. The sort of abuse Harry got is not good for children, at this point Harry is ripe for the picking.
5. The Weasley’s! How coincidental that the 1st magical people he runs into (outside of hagrid)happen to be them. They are some of old Dumbles most loyal minions. Perfectly set up to give Harry what he needs. Friends, family and even a wife later on.
Well think these points over and let’s continue once you have more questions. Don’t want to overload yaRon Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C45
Shinzo: It wasn’t until my 3rd time reading the series that I saw how ****ed up old Dumbles was. Gotta agree with you though the many fanfics did help in that as well
Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C45
shinigami8671: Ty so much for all the info! I do pay a lot of attention to the grammer and wording in general and it's nice to see someone noticed lol :)
1) Yes I know exactly what you mean but as I mentioned in one of the other comments (Idk if that was in this chap or not) but this part of the chapter is based on a real-life story of someone very close to me. I didn't change much in it so what you read is actually what happened to someone, albeit it is only his side of the story.
2) I agree completely. I will rewrite the first chapter and the 3rd one I think to better explain the whole concept as many people have some misunderstandings and issues with it and think the story takes a big turn suddenly.The Dawn of the New World · C1
Rexus: Haaaaaa~ i really wanna RKO this bi#ch. German suplex the sh#t out of her brain and then curb stomp her for good measure. God dammit plz author make this girl pay. Im seething with rage and if i had a metaphorical arm that could reach into the fictional world, i really wanna strangle this woman. Plz make her suffer a gut wrenching punch so hard she'll bleed to dead from the inside-out. I hope that block of wood of a police also never cares for her and finds a better girl. He's atleast a good man and he needs better, not this poisonous b#tch. Frick its early morning when and where im reading this and im already hopping mad. God i hope to see this woman suffer. Nothing sort of her excruciating suffering will bring peace while reading this till the next volume. Mc good crazy. Hahahhaha insanity is unbridled and unchained. U dont mess with a crazy person and so girl u r gonna get hell😃
Quick Transmigration: Saving The Crazy Villainess · C85
Rexus: Haaaaaa~ i really wanna RKO this bi#ch. German suplex the sh#t out of her brain and then curb stomp her for good measure. God dammit plz author make this girl pay. Im seething with rage and if i had a metaphorical arm that could reach into the fictional world, i really wanna strangle this woman. Plz make her suffer a gut wrenching punch so hard she'll bleed to dead from the inside-out. I hope that block of wood of a police also never cares for her and finds a better girl. He's atleast a good man and he needs better, not this poisonous b#tch. Frick its early morning when and where im reading this and im already hopping mad. God i hope to see this woman suffer. Nothing sort of her excruciating suffering will bring peace while reading this till the next volume. Mc good crazy. Hahahhaha insanity is unbridled and unchained. U dont mess with a crazy person and so girl u r gonna get hell😃
Quick Transmigration: Saving The Crazy Villainess · C85
Rexus: Ummm......haaaaaaa~ FUUUUUCCCCCCCKKKKKKKK YYYYOOOOUUUUUU BBBBIIIITTTTCCCCHHHHH!!!!!!!!
I HOPE TO GOD U GET BITCH SLAPPED SO HARD UR FUCKING HEAD EXPLODES. OKAY AUTHOR U MADE ME COMPLETLY HATE THIS PIECE OF GARBAGE SO I AM SHARPENING MY SWORD FOR THE ULTIMATE FACE SLAP AND BY GOD SO HELP ME I WANT TO HAVE THAT ITCH IN MY GUT CALLED HATE FOR THIS BITCH TO BE FULFILLED SO PLZ KILL THAT ITCH PROPERLY. STILL A VERY NICE CHAPTER. AND AGAIN FFFFUUUCCCKKKK UUUU BBBBIIIITTTTCCCCHHHHH!!!!!!!!Quick Transmigration: Saving The Crazy Villainess · C84
Chaoticmike: Right the kid matured more so his patience has gone up, but is he still going to find a way to kill the kids and the guards? Maybe push the guards into the magic beast way by ‘accident’ and fake his death so he can go to the dangerous land alone, he could put stuff in the ring of his, stuff from the inheritance grounds. No one will ever know.
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C74
Chaoticmike: Right the kid matured more so his patience has gone up, but is he still going to find a way to kill the kids and the guards? Maybe push the guards into the magic beast way by ‘accident’ and fake his death so he can go to the dangerous land alone, he could put stuff in the ring of his, stuff from the inheritance grounds. No one will ever know.
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C74
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C74
ikoyo: That's
wicked. The Shosti's did absolutely nothing to him.Birth of the Demonic Sword · C72
dragoonmk3: True. But many protagonist are somewhat 1 dimensional "Oh, some people are in trouble so I will try to save them and hopefully it will turn out ok". Noah however is a more realistic and pragmatic character.
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C48
dragoonmk3: Loving the story so far. While I did find it late, I gotta say that I'm loving the direction it's going. No cliche mcguffins making the MC a god among men(Just the natural conclusion that his older experienced mind can deal with brutal training regiments and sh*t that an Actual child's couldn't, which gives him a huge head start in developing his abilities).
And I appreciate that, while the MC essentially has no morals when it comes to his quest for power, it's not because he is inherently evil or a sociopath. He's a nihilist who during his search for a meaning to his life he realized that as wonderful as ideals and justice are on paper, without power you can't amount to anything. Like I said. He's not Evil, so much as pragmatic and logical to the point of losing his sense of empathy and compassion for those who aren't strong enough to grasp their ideals, themselves.Birth of the Demonic Sword · C48
CosmicVictor: Seeing your justification for noah's character , I dont think there are any flaws in your logic eve . It very much represents our current world too . Exploiting innocents doesnt make things right but if you dont exploit them, someone else will on their path to power. It's just you should stop it from getting yourself addicted to the idea of exploiting others and only do so when necessary. it's just not everyone can become a cultivator like noah even if they wanted to since you need talent for it . Case in point, Noah had his transmigration to thank for some of the abilities he was able to achieve . And seeing how most resources are monopolized in your world , I bet it would force any ambitious cultivator to turn to the path of evil if they were not born into a privileged status. And now that I think about it in most novels, it's always a fortuitous encounter that's helps the MC from forgoing the need to committing the evils other cultivators have to do so in order to achieve their goals. The powerful sects and the competition and politics within it perfectly portray this point.So right now, I am in peace with Noah's character. Though I have to request of you to not make him mindlessly evil. Since he knows the struggles of a commoner all too well, I hope that he changes the status quo like breaking the monopolization Of resources after he gains enough power. That would clearly show that he is not an unfeeling monster but also has the mindset to make things better after gaining enough power. In a nutshell being evil with a purpose .At least that is a good direction for him I think . After all , if he turns into a person who just has a lust for killing , then things might not be so smooth for him down the road cause commoners and nobles alike will consider him an enemy that way and even his mother might be shocked at her son's hidden side. Well right now my enthusiasm for your novel hasn't diminished yet since I think it's a lot more fresh compared to the xianxia novels we see all over the place . Good luck !
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C48
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C29
mitre: Lol a lion telling you he's harmless
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C27
Robert_8633: Makes no sense that he’d get trapped, it was stated he’s faster than everyone else and he wouldn’t be the last to escape the passage and there would be witnesses around to see the guy collapsing the tunnel, it’s like everybody else evaporated. retarded plot to put mc thru struggle and powerup
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C22
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C22
FallenBlue: Yup. You can check the Announcement post under vol 0. 😆
Quick Transmigration: Saving The Crazy Villainess · C83
Yue_Minatozakie: Because they're the same person
Jiang Li if he is the one having the spotlight/POV.
He Chen in the perspective of others coz in that world, Jiang Li is He Chen 😂
Quick Trans stories are like this. Maybe we girls get the advantage for there are so many quick trans series out there already. Sad thing is the MC is female or gay. It's my first time encountering a male MC quick transmigration novel 🤩Quick Transmigration: Saving The Crazy Villainess · C83
Monster Integration · C338
Monster Integration · C335
TallTrees: Its not clickbait its just the author messing up terms/names again. How have you not gotten used to it yet?
Monster Integration · C335
Luffydjw: I believe his fathers and mothers research, particularly the former will become increasingly important later in the novel so these chapters aren’t worthless. It also gives a change of pace to the novel may be it could be used less but it feels like a build to a time skip where he comes back and everything has changed.
Monster Integration · C334
Obito_Tobi: man you got it 1000 % wrong if he got nothing from his devil part then he will not get demonic energy and not mana you by making him unable to use mana made him a completely trash not worthy even issei who is a **** never trainned or anything got some magic power to activate his boosted gear and there is also after trainning for some time he improved very fast and mc of your is a trash his sacred gear plunder is useless since he got no magic power no demonic energy how do you expect him to withstand them if he got no energy to activate them or even snatch them basically your mc is useless even his gift is useless in his hands he doesn't worth a **** and swordmanship would never let him reach a high power the his limit is even at his very last days of his shi'tty life would be a weak ass ultimate class that would be easily defeated by some gifted high class and talented ones and since he got a **** magic power making him a trash his sacred gear plunder is useless even if he got some sacred gears even the weakest ones would be impossible to activate you understand what you made now a pathetic mc with a potential op power but is impossible to be used i suggest ( it's the only way to fix this sh'it ) you re write this and make mc talented in magic power if he got nothing from his devil blood i founf it useless to make him one if he got no power from the phenex family we don't need any drama but power
Endless Plunder in High School DxD · C5
Obito_Tobi: how in the bloody hell did his eyes and hair are black all the phenex clan have blonde hair and blue eyes
Endless Plunder in High School DxD · C1
Quick Transmigration: Saving The Crazy Villainess · C80
Rexus: This sh#t is so stupid and Ming bending rhat its quite strangely......average in the que aligning for the most stupidest novels to exist.
U have to turn it brain off for the most part but after witnessing atleast a 1000+ novels as good as eating Turd with butter and jam and calling it the day's favourite dessert, u get the hang of shutting down Ur brain and occasionally letting out the brain farts from all the excessive s#it being pushed inside in search of any good thing to read.
The story is shoddy, and is nothing but a wet dream in the making.
IT started out quite good the first few chapters and had some nice touches to it.
It being the few words- John Wick and son, but nothing after that other than the first 3 chapters where short of causing a brain aneurysm, and wishing u could dig out your brains, sprinkle it with manure, piss on it and sutart WW 3 with it and after all of that, elect it as the new king of the dead planet by playing snakes and ladders with Ur nose. But wishes are what they are- wishes. So read it as it is. A novel which is bad when Ur thinking but is there in the middle for when u turn it off completely. Its has no substance other than good editing and the words -John Wick and John Wick's son.
[Sorry this novel had to get the grenade while I held the pin but seeing so many many MANY bad novels made me want to rant a bit. And no I didn't go into detail of how bad it is point-wise but if you want I can and yes I read from the start to the latest chapter as of 25 aug 2019. Though Ur editing skills and grammar is better than most. Gotta give credit where it's due.]
Gave 5 stars for the world background cause even it's bad it's still a marvel fanfiction and marvel is f#cking deep and expansive so even retards can't do no wrong with its world background........ or they could if they had an IQ of 0.1 and thinks it's a good idea to make a marvel fanfiction with nothing of marvel in it.Marvels Number1 Assassin
