I hereby challenge thy claim!
ch 0 4 Stars Fell
Fantasy · MoL
fortresses will be "besieged", not "beseeched"
ch 14 Strongest Attack.
Fantasy · DMadLord
There was a weird transition from the fire challenge to the destruction. We start with Gehald lamenting how fire elemental has advantage in fire trial, then it suddenly mentions what happens after gravity trial. When did we pass the fire trial, not to mention the other ones? Did he get marks from all of them?
ch 13 Unfair Advantage?
Fantasy · DMadLord
Another thing. Too much lore dump at beginning. This is an issue a lot of authors or games make. The thing is you are lore dumping for us when we know nothing about the world. We have nothing to anchor the information to. The best way to start the story is by little bits of lore. Nothing for the first chapters, just describe how somebody goes through their life. There just by showing, not telling, you explain the world, customs etc. Just the simple action of MC going shopping or something already tells you so much about the world he is in. You also make the reader hungry for this lore, because there may be unexplained things. You leave them wondering about the higher order of things and capitalize on when you actually reveal it. You heavily put the cart before the horse imo.
ch 0 3 The Trial of Heaven.
Fantasy · DMadLord
I dont know, somehow dont like the narrator. Too much "you see". It is a very weird way of adressing the reader. It was especially jarring in the first episode, where the author talks about all the thing you can see etc. So it was : you see, there you could see what the eye could see for the beings that could see... Very clunky.
ch 0 3 The Trial of Heaven.
Fantasy · DMadLord
Who is Xu Mo?
ch 0 5 I Wish…For You All To Rest in Peace (1)
Eastern · Er Gen
It is not. It is trash and it is like a kid playing with thesaurus.
ch 329 Metallic Creature
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
Yeah, the translation is way worse now.
Praise God Emperor Roland!
ch 403 Student and Teacher
Fantasy · Er Mu
Really great story. Sad that stuff like this, that is pretty well written (especially world building, attention to little details etc) will always be overshadowed by shallow generic facesplapping stories... Guess harem overpowered protagonists just let too many teenagers self insert. Sadge.
ch 953 Bonus Chapter: Meal
Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
Long is Lucky Star. The Chosen one :P also to not be boring...
ch 49 On-Scene
Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
Am I the only one who dislikes the translation quality? Is this not the same person who did LOTM? There is so much punctuation missing. There are many uses of "the" when it is not supposed to be there. It all feels very rough, which is a bummer when the author is very wordy and it is supposed to be a pleasure to read his written word... I really do not understand why a site like this continues to have garbage translators. Amateurs.
ch 0 1 Central Assignment
Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
Hope you get cancer and die.
ch 400 Dignified
A Record of a Mortal’s Journey to Immortality
Eastern · Wang Yu