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I don't understand, if it's not going to have a harem, why does the author make it so charming with so many girls? I mean, Anya, Chloe, Rose, Demeter, possibly Haruhime and so on, it honestly seems like a waste.

Harem

One of the strongest points of fanfic is that the characters in the plot are known. Honestly, it discourages me to see fan fics that go little into the original characters and focus more on new characters that do not appear in the main plot I think so if they are going to use new characters, it is better for it to be an original story than a fan fic

and not add more girls, the more you add, the more difficult it will be to carry the story, you could even take 1 or 2, like mina ashido the truth is that she does not have much of an audience or I think that you can relate her again to kaminari

Yes At this point there is no going back with the harem, in my opinion you should focus on the plot and the harem only for a moment of relaxation and leave the idea that the harem is not viable in reality, in the end it is a story fictional, I think that most of us are not going to focus on the logic or all the necessary steps for the harem to happen, it happens and that's it, I don't think you should think about it that much The story must first be interesting and secondly please the reader a bit with the couples, not be so logical or it would fall into the boring as an example one piece luffy instead of being the most logical, rational and calculating for being the captain, he laughs and is witty

Sinceramente me conformó con que este en una relación con yaoyorozu, Melissa y MT lady que son de los personajes más atractivos pero que casi nadie los incluye. Y esa idea de que se separen después de tener 1 hijo no me gusta para nada, osea prácticamente en ese caso o las chicas consiguen su propia pareja después (suena o deja sabor NTR) o se quedan solas que tampoco es bueno en una historia que tiene romance

Gracias, me encanta la historia [img=recommend]

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Samui, mei, Hanabi y anko

Respeto tu opinión sobre el harem, y si, no es realista en la vida real que pase pero es una historia de otro mundo con poderes que se obtienen comiendo frutas... Personas que se elementizan.... Personas que pueden golpear a los que se elementizan con entrenamiento de alma y/o cuerpo...personas que pueden ver el futuro entrenando...y lo menos real es un tipo con varias mujeres, en cuanto a la dificultad de escribir admito que debe ser exponencialmente más difícil escribir con varias parejas y no hacerlo ver superficial, me imagino que tu historia es buena y respeto que la escribas, solo me ha molestado que varias personas digan que no es real el harem en una historia ficticia y tenía que sacarlo, suerte y saludos