Avid reader
this book starts off as an attempt at writing a zero to hero novel, but quickly gets sidetracked for most of the free chapters into what amounts as an isekai. the isekai portion is way too smooth sailing. The mc has no real speed bumps, or character development, in this supposed trial (at least during the free section), and the goal of the trial isn't well explained. the mc only brings up his old world once in the free portion, he should be worrying about his remaining family constantly. i don't see the point in spending coins on this. Maybe if the premium started just as the mc returned from the isekai trial, i would have continued reading. this book needs a slight rework to give a real deep hook to the reader before going premium if the author wants to really see more effective income.
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Webnovel
this book starts off as an attempt at writing a zero to hero novel, but quickly gets sidetracked for most of the free chapters into what amounts as an isekai. the isekai portion is way too smooth sailing. The mc has no real speed bumps, or character development, in this supposed trial (at least during the free section), and the goal of the trial isn't well explained. the mc only brings up his old world once in the free portion, he should be worrying about his remaining family constantly. i don't see the point in spending coins on this. Maybe if the premium started just as the mc returned from the isekai trial, i would have continued reading. this book needs a slight rework to give a real deep hook to the reader before going premium if the author wants to really see more effective income.
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Urban · imWold