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Legend of meng ho springs to mind

There won’t be much waste , when your digestive system is strong and your body needs blood qi, this will result in everything be used

Wow this is the very first time ive read A story on webnovel that Moved me emotionally. you’re very good

So much potential lost to such an inane plot

Endless Rambling

Lol 'blackout' in every sense of the word

Is this really the mind of a matured man? Lets reveal his greatest Power when any old diamond tiered can capTure him and exploit his powers

So hes in a new world with no idea about its background, but insists on plodding on without gaining any neW knowledge. saying its useless and all the while acting like a fool, who also doesnt care what Star it is despite the resources it can bring him. mC is forcefully made to be an idiot but will be ultra strong just to satisfy aN Overdone trope

They had time to loot these ‘troublesome cats’ that died in a matter of seconds and then chase after their main quarry. have you logic?

Ok now thats what i say good plot twisting and side character development. please keep up the quality work but stop making those unbelieveble nerfed fights just to complicate the plot. those assassins tried to kill Him, who cares iF its a prIncesses hObby. the truth is, if he didnt have the strength he would have died to the so called innocent hobby. she should die and not become part of his harem Unless you want to deGrade your story

He let them go? 200 to 3 and he could have easily used bullets on them? Why make the fights so Ridiculuos?

Idiot idiot idiot? Is this you trying to balance things out? Or trying to act supercool But actually being stupider than a moron. what happen to all His skilLs, Night and all that

I’m only reading this for the challenge. So let’s just be honest. If you’re writing a character, be real. A 21yo who is so stupid, feels to me as if the author himself is a 10yr old