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i dont read most of the time because i got things to do, i just use the listen function. the japanese name with translation is a nice touch since voice reader also translates it, the japanse accent in listening function was good surprise thank you for the chapter

i hope it helps!! thanks for the chapter

can you run your novel in ms word? i mostly use listen function and it sounds like broken english, i dont mean to be rude just copy paste in ms words for auto correct, you lack some word such as "the, a , it etc.." hope you do better

happy new year!!

lightning sword with paralysis? and when it grows with him later it can turn to a semi lightsaber?

rewrite means a difrent story, just keep him as a playboy and juat stick with it, having a story of like where he can brag he banged a few goddess would be a great boasting achievementb or him

it kinda slowed down a lot, but thanks for thhe chapter

translations are unbearable

thats a spoiler

cant he use enhancement on extraction?

i get it that from the start it said that he will have someone who can order him around but it get to this point where while i read i feel the frustration of being ordered around by someone who he doesnt even know, and its very very annoying so i will drop this novel. its already anoying having to listen to my woman and here comes another story of suffocation..

you put demigods and skilled teens in world of one o piece? hope they dont get to meet celestial dragons

😑😑😑 copy paste mode

thanks for the response

the story is great but if theres too many woman its just getting far from the story. i get the chatacter build up and stuff but its just the 1st nightmare. if he gets 2-4 girls a nightmare just how many chapters would that be, and just the lemons are to be expected a lot more chapter. sorry to be a bummer just got too tired of alot of woman story, i specially like the more adventure and stuff

thanks for the chap!!!!!