Im just glad that you still writing.. So sorry that there no respon for the last chapter
ch 140 Dealing with Cain
Games · PopcornSectMaster
Well idk how the fiction story can make our belief britle.. But just hope you have a peace time.. Honestly if i can give opinion.. There no conflict with belief if even the story didnt have earth and religion.. But yeah this is fiction story and if your story didnt make other people degrade his moral or make villain so what sin did you make? No.. Your story make other people smile.. And make people smile is good virtue. But im just a brat so that was my naive thought.. Hope your have a peaceful mind and keep your going with everything you do. Aamiin
ch 165 Chapter 164 - We Are Here
Fantasy · RoadBlock92
Damn.. What a mess.. Keep going char.. Make your game
ch 0 1 Prelude
Fantasy · Srinlife
That was great improvement for stat panel.. 👍👍
ch 48 The Mountains of Helda I
Games · easyread
There minor miss with unspent stat from lv 5 to lv 6.. Total of unspent stat still 40 from lv 5 - lv 6.. And i think your have a little mess.. But its minor.. You can rewrite to upcoming chapter or you can tweak bass stat from 55 55 60 55 55 And minus 10 so you didnt have to edit a lot of chapter.. Caiyoo!!
ch 0 7 Hitting the levels hard and my first dungeon
Games · easyread
Yo, dear author,, how about you split the interface for skill and perk for passive and active.. There skill with level 1/10 but there was a skill that have non level.. So i think you can just split it so when the skill added like 30 skill or more,, your not misspell or reader can make easy to read them.. Just opinion.. I enjoy your story.. Keep it up
ch 43 Finding The Hermit Flint III
Games · easyread
You should call this dark age
"All male individuals of your species have been exterminated, to allow us to implant our fertile, lab-created seeds into females, which act as incubators. In this way, new generations will proliferate and give birth to a new, more evolved human race".
Fantasy · Immanioripse
Get well soon
May I see you guys again.
Fantasy · Forestwind3
Your not undeveloped. Take a pride
At this moment, the beginning of the Sacred Commmander, Leader of the 9 Saintly Generals was about to begin - this uprising would be one so momentous. No one could stop it, not even my undeveloped writing skills.
Games · Syphiinz
Come back please. , you cant handle Ara Ara
" Ara ara...I did not know we had visitors."
Games · XiaoKongxu
Its debuff
Effect 1: Reduces experience gained from killing zombies by ninety-nine percent.
Fantasy · _chomps
LoL
The translation microchip in Xia Fei's body was very useful in this matter. With its translation, the essence of the poems had been preserved to its greatest extent, unlike many other translated works, which was just an insult to the original work.
Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
Moorreeee.. Great stories
ch 43 The Noob Works Harder
Noob Player
Games · HotIce