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So Petunia is now a red head instead of a blonde?

Also why the straight up dudes name? Keith is outright a male name?

That's not a modern look.

Ah, and not only is he now saying differently in only a few chapters but he even outright insults the manhood of those who don't like it? Insulting himself from a few chapters ago as I said.

Is there a reason he cant put the symbol on something he can store or carry around? Like a metal platform or even a round sewer lid if the sigil is small enough? A mobile entrance would obviously be useful.

Heads up, your title should end with "Every Reality". The word Every takes care of the plural part of Realities. Just figured youd want your title to make sense and not turn people away. If someone fudges up their story description it's rather bad. Messing up the title itself is a very good way to turn people away as a billboard of a signal that theres plenty more issues with the story itself.

Can someone explain the title? Isnt it the step sister that's always stuck. How is he unstuck?

I dont know where golden finger came from the last couple years as a replacement term but it's an annoying and weird replacement that I'm really tired of seeing.

Why does the story intro itself refer to Tsunade as a man then say she? The intro is barely a paragraph and its messed up.

Meterea Loreria. Am I just blind or is she not on this list?

No picture for Misha.

Just stating the likely truth. If you're doing it casual and have no intention of going very far with any of your stories it would be nice to know. Didn't insult you and didnt lie. And I think it's fair for people to be annoyed when they like a story and its abruptly dropped. More so when they dont seem to care and intend to do so again without a word on the subject as is the cast nearly everytime. So free or not, annoying things are annoying and I think it's fine if I use the comment section to.. comment. Nice door btw.

So.. come over and read my new story that I'll likely drop as well? Got your hopes up by suddenly posting again but I wanted to make use of your like for the story I disappeared from to get you to read my new one? That what's supposed to be taken away from this post?

Any chance for some tags being added?

I'm seeing Fathers, grandfathers, grandmother but I'm not seeing any spouses beyond Sakumo.

The story description mentions poor Chi Chi. But really is there a single female in the series good or bad that doesnt get a raw deal aside from the Angel's (though babysitting the destruction gods is meh) and perhaps Android 18? No I suppose there is Videl and maybe, eventually the Mai who ends up with Trunks.