Goodness!!! It has been years since I last read something on Webnovel. This is really good, but I think author could have done a better job at background buildup. Our FL and new ML interactions were okay, however, they could have had some feelings or attraction at the beginning. Because no matter how workaholic or family oriented one can be, there are times that they might get caught in feelings and distracted. It is perfectly fine for an outsider point of view to perceive that she is not thinking or reading too much on their interaction, however it is not if the story is about her POV. Otherwise, readers might feel that it is bit rushed during the transition period. And also, rather than generalizing their business growth, author could have taken a few incidents to emphasize their influence. For an example, sister Wei's story drags bit too much, yet it only adds a little color to the story (May be it does but this is how I felt at that moment, because the author proves their capability for emotional buildup through her writing in the last few chapters). Even so, compared to some other novels in this platform, most of the characters are properly linked to the story at the end. ......................................................................... AND HOW COULD YOU!!! I think we deserve another two chapters about their second life, because of the heartache at the end. It is totally unfair that you stop at that "NO". Dear author, you are bad. Totally deserve your own Shiliu for stopping like that. How could you!!
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Goodness!!! It has been years since I last read something on Webnovel. This is really good, but I think author could have done a better job at background buildup. Our FL and new ML interactions were okay, however, they could have had some feelings or attraction at the beginning. Because no matter how workaholic or family oriented one can be, there are times that they might get caught in feelings and distracted. It is perfectly fine for an outsider point of view to perceive that she is not thinking or reading too much on their interaction, however it is not if the story is about her POV. Otherwise, readers might feel that it is bit rushed during the transition period. And also, rather than generalizing their business growth, author could have taken a few incidents to emphasize their influence. For an example, sister Wei's story drags bit too much, yet it only adds a little color to the story (May be it does but this is how I felt at that moment, because the author proves their capability for emotional buildup through her writing in the last few chapters). Even so, compared to some other novels in this platform, most of the characters are properly linked to the story at the end. ......................................................................... AND HOW COULD YOU!!! I think we deserve another two chapters about their second life, because of the heartache at the end. It is totally unfair that you stop at that "NO". Dear author, you are bad. Totally deserve your own Shiliu for stopping like that. How could you!!
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Urban · Yearly Blossoms