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ch 0 1 Giving Birth
General · Weng Liuli
First he is on an island, he finds a box, next second he suddenly has a blueprint from a person he befriended. Then he suddenly has a raft and a shark that attacks. Not to mention I saw the name Su Mo popping up once in a while that I recognize from another story similar to this one who ALSO was attacked by a shark. *sighs* look I got no qualms with you and I don’t really care where you get your ideas from but if you’re gonna steal pieces from other stories at least be smart enough to CHANGE THE NAMES! And also try to explain things more clearly in the story. One seconds he’s on the island with shortage of space, the next he is suddenly on a raft. WHEN did he build the raft? HOW did he build it? Explain how he gets items and blueprints instead of randomly jumping from one topic to the other. I’ll say it very simply so you can understand: IT’S CONFUSING!!! Please for all that’s holy, DO something about it!😵💫🤯😒😞
ch 10 Ready to build a house
Games · Aniki1
See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
ch 40 Defeating the Demon Skeleton
Fantasy · A PIece of Pudding
See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
ch 40 Assault Crossbow
Sci-fi · Bombastic Winning
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 83 Insta-kill Before They Even Appear!
Fantasy · Strange Human
It's FOUR STAR!!!! You made him break through back in the prison rebellion. The test to enter the Thunder god army, remember?!
After looking at Princess Jonah's interface, Sullo nodded in satisfaction. Who would have thought that a three-star lower god like him would actually be able to create a god-level believer.
Sci-fi · Follower of Four Gods
He's ALREADY A 4 STAR GOD!!! You idiot! Try to keep up with your own story, aye?! [img=faceslap]
A three-star demigod actually wanted to create a divine-level believer. This was simply unheard of.
Sci-fi · Follower of Four Gods
He already is a four star god yet now he's suddenly back a three-star god? If you're gonna copy text from your previous pages then at least alter them enough that it ISN'T noticeable that you copied them. [img=faceslap]
He discovered that it was just a little fellow who was about to break through to become a four-star god.
Sci-fi · Follower of Four Gods
See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
ch 0 1 Giving Birth
General · Weng Liuli
Hope you update soon. I really like how it's coming up. Maybe you could have her go into the mountains where she'll be able to save eagles, snow leopards, vultures and so on. Oh! Maybe have her find someone who is a dentist or something? Anyways, on a side note; you are making her into a mary-sue. Personally I don't really mind but keep in mind that people are not perfect and even she should make some CLEAR mistakes. Having her get into trouble but walk out of it just as easy makes it kinda boring. So please make sure she's not TOO perfect. And UPDATE!!! PLEASE!!! I really wanna know what's gonna happen next. Is she also gonna cross paths with Lycans aka werewolves? How about Big foot? Harpies? Vampires? Don't tell me the only supernatural creatures in the world are mermaids and those people after her parents.[img=recommend]
ch 66 66 Hidden
Fantasy · Oppo_Red
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
ch 0 1 Doomsday Survival Game
Sci-fi · Catty Catty Catty
Where did Irene come from??? I read and reread and last time she was drowning in the cavern with her fellow believers and now she's in the same group as Mcgee! Where is the connection?? How did they find eachother? What happened during that period? Seriously this is confusing. :/
ch 75 Food Delivered to Our Doorstep
Eastern · Global Game
Do you HAVE to repeat everything twice to make us understand that someone is shocked or crazy or something? If you really want someone to understand that your character is shocked or something try to use different synonyms or different ways of explaining. But seriously! "Klein didn't dodge" "Yes, he didn't dodge at all." Something like that really can get quickly on someone's nerves. Also, try to make a character speak everything at once. you seperate the sentences all the time it's annoying and confusing to the point one doesn't even understand if the mc is saying it or someone else.
ch 218 Can’t Even a Cheating Device Make Up For the Difference Between the Two of Them?
Sci-fi · Sword Old Wolf
A few chapters ago Klein plans to go the abandoned dragon nest. He skips from one tomb to another and that's okay but suddenly he is in a tomb with a cereberus and the next chapter he suddenly has gotten his hands on the treasures in the dragon nest! It doesn't make any sense! Please try to solve this, it's really confusing and annoys me greatly.
ch 66 Little Fox and Little Wind Evolve Once Again!
Sci-fi · Sword Old Wolf
See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon
ch 413 Popularity
My Children Are Fierce and Adorable!
General · Weng Liuli