To be honest, it's not so bad. The story is interesting, the characters are well-known, and I think they stay true to their personalities. What's lacking is editing in the structure of each chapter, as well as a well-planned or well-written development.
Damn! I could feel the Chinese influence in every word! I just hope it's not like that in the rest of the chapters.[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
'Of all the dog-blood plots, why did I have to transmigrate as a zombie? Sure, I wasn't exactly an unparalleled beauty in my past life, but I was still a handsome guy! The Heavens must be blind.'
I Evolved as an Intelligent Zombie in the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs
A great story, one of the best on this site and one of the best Harry Potter fanfics in the world.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Gary Stu in Hollywood? [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
La historia sin duda es buena, pero por favor, date un tiempo y arregla esos horrores ortográficos. (normalmente ni siquiera me percató de errores así, pero es tan evidente que duele)[img=In your face]
HE'S BACK!!!! [img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous]
Don't you feel like I hadn't posted in a long time?... Nah, must have been the wind.
Daily Drama (In American TV Shows)
TV · Maximus_Quill
Definitely a great episode and an amazing battle! Incredible work! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
What a great ending! [img=Good night][img=Cries]
Too poetic for my taste, but I think it fits with the Disney world itself; certainly an interesting start, I hope it doesn't falter. [img=strong][img=recommend][img=strong][img=recommend][img=strong][img=recommend]
I almost lost faith in a new chapter, it's great that it's still going! Definitely a great chapter! Thank you.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Evangelion: Mi Otro Yo (+18)
Anime & Comics · JiraiyaSamaWriter