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After a while I finally decided to rate this novel. It just pains me how this novel is ranked top 1 when it clearly doesn't deserves it and there are other better works worthy of the rank. So why is this on the rank one you ask? Because the author basically buys it by uploading more chapters if people vote for the story. Quite an unfair way to earn top 1 imo, considering this story doesnt even deserve to be in the top 100. Let's get started with the writing. It's mediocre at best, I see my 15y/o sister writing better than how the author tells the story. It get a bit better as the chapter progresses but it's just that, "a bit" but considering how horrible the start was, it certainly aint any good. They simply cant tell the story that the reader would understand well and actually enjoy reading, at some point I'm forced to just skim through the texts as it get incredibly boring. Sometimes I thought this was written by a kid by how cringe a lot of interactions are Plot. Too predictable and unoriginal. School arc with bullying, and you know that other friend who got bullied would eventually betray them. things wouls get introduced randomly and everything seems forced to the point the author would make the characters make idiotic decisions so that a scenario would happen to progress the story. Characters It's always a common rule that an author could only make a character as smart as they are, I agree with this. Characters that shouldnt be making dumb mistakes are making them for no reason just because the author thinks its convenient and progresses the plot. MC is an idiot, makes a lot of bad decisions that makes no sense. Side characters are boring and two-dimensional. World building The world doesnt make sense, lots of bs that shouldn't happen. Also quite unoriginal, just with the introduction of vampires. Author tried to make an interesting world but failed miserably. Reached chapter 500+ before I stopped realizing I wasted my time reading this story. I was tricked into reading further as people said "it gets better". No it doesnt, it just improved from garbage to slightly less garbage.

This is probably one of the worst moster/pet novel I've read. Fights are monotone and mostly just trainers shouting out moves like in pokemon but now it's on text so it get's a lot more boring. Speaking of pokemon, this novel might as well just be a fan fiction of that, just more evolutions paths and add a bit of xianxia/wuxia with cultivation and mc with a cheat, heck some of the moves are literally copied from pokemon. Author's naming sense is also garbage some evolutions are literally saying that the creature got bigger with the first form having the word "little" or "small" then the second being that animal and then next with some sort of "big", you get the point. Slice of life is nice and all but if you get to the point that it pretty much ruins the maint point of a story then it just becomes absolutely boring. This literally take the worst point of slice of life, monster/pet, and cultivation without any of their good point. Boring and most of the time cringey conversations either with the pet or the side characters and the girlfriend he got even before hatchimg his 2nd pet, unsatisfying power increase, boring fights, unimaginative pet types, yada yada.

The novel just doesn't make sense. Hard to read and the story is all over the place. The characters are so bland and their conversations are either boring, cringey, or makes no sense.

The start was insanely good. As the story progress however, the plot became riduculously dumb. Wasted potential, not reccommended if you still want to keep your braincells.

What happened? Is the novel on hiatus?

Quite unique ideas for a novel as I haven't seen ithers that have similar concepts. The writing however is quite poor... It's bad to the point that I just can't indulge myself in the story. I understand that it's an original and might not be edited yet but I just can't make myself to read this at it's current state. Anyways, the author has an interesting novel here and hopefully a decent storyline too. I'll read it again after it got edited.[img=recommend]