Admiral_Jako

Space, the final frontier. After centuries of technological advancement, humanity has set out to colonize the stars. We have broken the speed of light, conquered the galaxy, and even defied the laws of gravity and mortality. But despite all of our knowledge and progress, humans remain largely the same - divided, greedy, and self-serving. As these colonies grew and developed their own systems and societies, they eventually broke away from the Old Earth Alliance. As always, the history of humanity repeats itself, and soon war and destruction followed in our universe. This is the story of Jakobsen, who rises to become the greatest admiral in the galaxy. Like all great stories, it begins with humble beginnings. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Author's note: This is a re-write of my previous test attempt, hopefully it makes a better read for you readers.

Space the final frontier, finally after centuries of technology advance we have set out to colonize the stars. Human has conquered the galaxy, broken the speed of light, broken the chains of mortality and even defy the theory of gravity. Yet Man wiser from the knowledge gain from year of development remains largely the same, divided, greedy, and self-serving. Once those colonies got out of range of the Old Earth Alliance, they grow and sprouted into their own system and society. And humans always repeat history, war and destruction soon follows in our universe. This is a story about Jakobsen raise to be the greatest Admiral in the galaxy and like all story it start from a humble beginning.