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Horusz: This chapter was a total mess, apparently the MC is stupid, I will continue reading, but i no longer expect great things ...I'm Yamcha EX · C8
Luxus_Logo: Superman was nothing special (excepr being a noble of kryton)all his overpoweredness was for entertainment sake and someone bred to be a warrior with superior Gene's he should be close if not on the level of superman I can understand you not wanting to make his so overpowered but making him so weak is just as harmful to the story you have to find a balence in between them or else it'll get boringDio El · C30
CrimsonEye: why the **** would you want him to look like palpatine he looks f*cking uglyHarry Potter Rise of the Sith Empire · C1
Dao_Overlord: Love the chapter but the mc is kind of stupid that he donated trillions of dollars to charities even though his company helps produce medicines that can cure diseases with better equipment to research (plus I think it’s impossible and would be illegal even if you’re able to use your all your companies finances as you need as some of that money is also the shareholders money as they have shares in the company). Well not that any of this mattersThe Football King · C3
atomjack111: not very good for people who haven't read toriko to know the powers and food there gaining it is mostly unreadable gibberish to those who don't know and might turn them away from your storyA Saiyan in the Multiverse · C85
shadylord: I dunno what happen to author, but after narutoverse, all seems so rush. Saiyan world & toriko world, the story so weird and uninteresting to readA Saiyan in the Multiverse · C85
ErozothDraeor: This past two chapters are not that good. At least before there was some explanation, here you are going for powers so you want to do it quick and didn't bother.
I am not familiar with the world he is in, this chapters are just full of random words that mean nothing. If you can't take the time to explain a bit about the world maybe you shouldn't use it, my two cents.A Saiyan in the Multiverse · C85
Pons: You do,know that Earnest A is the most OP skill he has right now he could kill anything and be one punch man he could kill like God,Dragon,anything in one blow right if he kills enough thing and of does not even have certain thing things you have to kill.you could kill like 1 hp things and get 1 Permanently attackThe Immortal Player · C11
TianYa: Did he seriously play this game for 6 years? MC is too immature for meThe Immortal Player · C11
DragonEmperors: Hateful MC and Bitches... You seem planned the MC become a sovereign yet with the starting As lowest of the lowest, and the main motivation of it a revenge. Why don't you just make Dark MC instead of this... Have to say good bye for this. The Synopsis reel me in the beginning of the story make me hate it. So, good bye..Gacha Sovereign
Raze_: I usually give novels 20-30 chapters, although there is a few scenarios in which I will drop the novel earlier, first is when people use "u" instead of "you" or "boi" instead of "boy," for some reason that just infuriates me. Second is when the author makes mistakes with words like he/she or his/hers, after all if the author is so bad at English that they can't even get their character's genders right I highly doubt that the rest of the novel will be legible anyways.The Man from Hell
Rk6T: I dont really have problem with the idea of the novel, but the thing that messes up what could be a decent or amazing novel is the MC, who is an ***** mentally but behaves like a little child with no goals or vision, he instantly wishish to protect the first person he sees as family and in this case is the child version of Integra Hellsing.
I can deal with any problem from a novel but if the MC is a beta male or a cringe then its a huge no for me. If author develops the MC into a more badass main character who strives for his goals and doesnt behave childish or weak then get back at me.Echo Reincarnation Journey Through Multiverse
FBI_B1TCH: A harem without a milf is like an oreo cookie with no filling. It's just unnatural.THE TRIALS: Path Toward Godhood.[MY HERO ACADEMIA] (MATURE CONTENT) · C14
Raze_: I agree, in fact one of the primary reasons I’ll drop a novel is bad grammar, with the other reasons being an idiotic mc (it especially irks me when the author calls their mc a “genius” when you can clearly see that they’re less intelligent then the average primary school student), and the final main reason I drop novels is the complete lack of, or extreme repetition of background information and world development.King of Gods and Immortals · C2
Alexandroo: What a waste of my time. 15,000 chapters are just saying your world has collapsed. Fuck. I prefer the MC cliche that arrives in the fucking world and knows where it is, who it is and where it goes. Instead of a stupid little girl who just knows how to widen her eyes and say that her world has fallen.The Goddess of Death · C2
L1_a: “Vegeta, what does the course say about the last sentence’s cringe level”
“It’s.... It’s over 9000”Gacha Sovereign · C4
Origin_Order_Chaos: Should have written a totag fan-fic would have enjoyed the fucking best but thus just doesn't goes at allllllllll.... So very disappointed......sry for this but can enjoy two different types very very different together .....System in Another World · C10
IERS: Thank you for the chapter, i can´t wait for the next update,Dio El · C19
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