Overall impression; I like how at times, the writing gives off a very... mysterious kind of feeling. However, I do not like how the multiple points of view were used without any obvious change or warnings to the narration. Sometimes, it's the MC, sometimes it's coming from an omniscient pov, which can get confusing but I assume it gets better over time. The text is very much relatable, or at least from how I interpret it and it gives off a very realistically feel of those sorts. I'll put this on my wait-list to read because I rarely read male MC novels which could capture me based on the first chapter.
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Teen · Tailrs ink
mtlnovel.com
团宠小可爱成了满级大佬
我家男人形象又崩了
tsk tsk, plot-sama's really great here lol
Wen Qiao wasn't hoping to be successful on the first attempt. It was better to take things slow. There might be psychosis genes running in their family, but there were also genes producing geniuses.
Urban · Ding Jiashu
timeskip?
Xu Nuan was browsing through the internet on her phone when she froze hearing his words. He remembered? She had once said in the hospital while ordering food that she can't mushrooms.
Urban · Kamlyn
thank you for the review! will definitely keep your words close in mind and update more in the future^^
raw title: 他来了, 请闭眼alternate title: When He Comes, Close Your Eyes