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sorry I took so long to see your reply, looking over the chapter again, either you've already edited it, or I'm in a clearer state of mind since it reads clearly to me now. I recall posting that comment because there were a few moments where the speaker seemed to change either without mention or without a clear transition of character tone/style. Apologies for being so vague

some parts of the exchange near the end of this chapter are a bit rough in terms of who says what, but otherwise, I like where this is heading [img=recommend]